for Into Dust5/8/2011 c17 
7SecretPassion
NO! What happens to Aiden and Aislyn? And Paige and Tee! And Travis! And ANYBODY! (:
7SecretPassionNO! What happens to Aiden and Aislyn? And Paige and Tee! And Travis! And ANYBODY! (:
3/17/2011 c17 8SpasticLittleGirl
YES! AUSTRALIA! I might bump into you! Except I don't know you...ANYWAY.
Please tell me you're going to continue with this story! I think this would end really nicely - hell, you could just end it in the next chapter, but I just really want this to sort of have ane ending...It just brings a bit of closure, you know? :)
8SpasticLittleGirlYES! AUSTRALIA! I might bump into you! Except I don't know you...ANYWAY.
Please tell me you're going to continue with this story! I think this would end really nicely - hell, you could just end it in the next chapter, but I just really want this to sort of have ane ending...It just brings a bit of closure, you know? :)
3/15/2011 c3 SpasticLittleGirl
So, I noticed a few more gramar problems...
Sure she loved Charlie and Olli, but she had a history with the people who sat in her living room, playing a game of shureraids.
I think you mean 'charades' here? The game where you can't talk, and act everything out?
So, I noticed a few more gramar problems...
Sure she loved Charlie and Olli, but she had a history with the people who sat in her living room, playing a game of shureraids.
I think you mean 'charades' here? The game where you can't talk, and act everything out?
10/15/2008 c5 1LoveRehab
hey! It's your BFF, back again!
So I really liked this chapter. I liked the scene with Aiden and his psychiatrist. Very interesting.
I've noticed that instead of writing 'one,' you write 'on.'
1LoveRehabhey! It's your BFF, back again!
So I really liked this chapter. I liked the scene with Aiden and his psychiatrist. Very interesting.
I've noticed that instead of writing 'one,' you write 'on.'
10/15/2008 c4 LoveRehab
I knew they'd do it.
Aiden and Ash.
Just not so soon.
I thought like, the next chapter. ha
Oh you're good.
Coolio.
I knew they'd do it.
Aiden and Ash.
Just not so soon.
I thought like, the next chapter. ha
Oh you're good.
Coolio.
10/15/2008 c3 LoveRehab
Great. I found a few mistakes in this chapter, bff.
"But he continued to have so mess ups, meaning he would yell at the instructor, storm out."
I think you meant to say:
"But he continued to have some mess ups..."
Also, Quinn says, “Nice to see you to Ash.”
'Too' instead to 'to.'
I love Aiden and Ash's relationship.
And Tee, Quinn, Paige and Janie.
I didn't comment earlier, but whoa. Janie's preggers! haha
Great. I found a few mistakes in this chapter, bff.
"But he continued to have so mess ups, meaning he would yell at the instructor, storm out."
I think you meant to say:
"But he continued to have some mess ups..."
Also, Quinn says, “Nice to see you to Ash.”
'Too' instead to 'to.'
I love Aiden and Ash's relationship.
And Tee, Quinn, Paige and Janie.
I didn't comment earlier, but whoa. Janie's preggers! haha
10/15/2008 c2 LoveRehab
Hello. Hello. My friend's called me in the middle of reading so I took a breather and came back.
I'm back!
I like this Olli guy. I love good guy friends, especially ones who don't have feelings for the main character. Awesomeness.
Hello. Hello. My friend's called me in the middle of reading so I took a breather and came back.
I'm back!
I like this Olli guy. I love good guy friends, especially ones who don't have feelings for the main character. Awesomeness.
10/15/2008 c1 LoveRehab
Okay. So I'm back! I took a break from reading to fully take in the time change between Echo and Into Dust. Now I'm ready to read all about Echo.
Okay. So I'm back! I took a break from reading to fully take in the time change between Echo and Into Dust. Now I'm ready to read all about Echo.
6/22/2008 c16 CRAZY FOR APPLES
Your stories are really great. I wish you would update again. Because this is just to amazing to be left alone. lol
Well I hope you update soon!
Your stories are really great. I wish you would update again. Because this is just to amazing to be left alone. lol
Well I hope you update soon!
6/13/2008 c17 brokencrystal7
i am pretty sad that you will not make a sequil for this story but i know that this story had to end some time. still sad.
im ot sure but have you stopped writing the story? i really want to know what will happen next.
PLEASE UPDATE!
i am pretty sad that you will not make a sequil for this story but i know that this story had to end some time. still sad.
im ot sure but have you stopped writing the story? i really want to know what will happen next.
PLEASE UPDATE!
6/12/2008 c13 brokencrystal7
hi again, i just love reviewing stories that i just cant have enough of. okay well when i was reading this chapter i was also hearing music...okay so the song that i was listening to really reminded me of aiden and ash's relationship. well not everything about the song sound like their relationship but the chours really makes me think of them.
okay well if you were thinking of which song is it well it is...my immortal by evanescene. i know that it may not sound perfect for them but i just had to tell you.
well bye,
brokencrystal7
hi again, i just love reviewing stories that i just cant have enough of. okay well when i was reading this chapter i was also hearing music...okay so the song that i was listening to really reminded me of aiden and ash's relationship. well not everything about the song sound like their relationship but the chours really makes me think of them.
okay well if you were thinking of which song is it well it is...my immortal by evanescene. i know that it may not sound perfect for them but i just had to tell you.
well bye,
brokencrystal7
6/12/2008 c8 brokencrystal7
i love your message that you have at the end about tequila. i hope that i will never have to taste that nasty stuff or even be near it.
so back to the story... i dont know if i am liking this luke guy so much. i guess that i am just turning into an aiden fan.:D
i just wish that aiden and ash could be together and be happy but i know that that wouldnt sound really realistic.
well... i guess that i just have to keep reading to see what is going to happen with aiden and ash,
Brokencrytsal7
i love your message that you have at the end about tequila. i hope that i will never have to taste that nasty stuff or even be near it.
so back to the story... i dont know if i am liking this luke guy so much. i guess that i am just turning into an aiden fan.:D
i just wish that aiden and ash could be together and be happy but i know that that wouldnt sound really realistic.
well... i guess that i just have to keep reading to see what is going to happen with aiden and ash,
Brokencrytsal7