for Into Dust9/4/2007 c16 hellokittygirl
Wow. Can you say dramatic? This was great, between the fight with Ollie and Charlie, and Janie's labor (I think), this was just fantastic.
And ... I forgot who Jack was, so I was wondering ... is he gay? haha. 'Cause I was thinking, and I mean, there's no way Aiden would let him dance with Ash if he WEREN'T gay, right? Not sure. ha.
Update soon?
-Lqd
Wow. Can you say dramatic? This was great, between the fight with Ollie and Charlie, and Janie's labor (I think), this was just fantastic.
And ... I forgot who Jack was, so I was wondering ... is he gay? haha. 'Cause I was thinking, and I mean, there's no way Aiden would let him dance with Ash if he WEREN'T gay, right? Not sure. ha.
Update soon?
-Lqd
9/4/2007 c16 Monkebella
Great update. We totally understand you having a life outside of this site but so so happy that you wrote something. Well just wanted to review so I dont get the glare anymore, Im always busy since I read this at work... sh. Ciao
Great update. We totally understand you having a life outside of this site but so so happy that you wrote something. Well just wanted to review so I dont get the glare anymore, Im always busy since I read this at work... sh. Ciao
9/4/2007 c16 
5dreamweaver138
JANIE'S GONNA HAVE HER BABY
i can't believe this story's been updated. well i can but figure of speech and all .
good as always and i hope to see an update soon!
dreamweaver138
5dreamweaver138JANIE'S GONNA HAVE HER BABY
i can't believe this story's been updated. well i can but figure of speech and all .
good as always and i hope to see an update soon!
dreamweaver138
9/3/2007 c16 OoohLookACat
:O
YOU'RE FRIENDS WITH PARAMORE!
envy!
they're coming to australia in october
so i get to see them
yay!
and woah.
looks like u had a totally AWESOME summer
and a totally awesome chapter too
gasp
janie!
is she gonna be okay?
drama
gotta love it
yay for the return of jack
can't wait for more!
izzie
:O
YOU'RE FRIENDS WITH PARAMORE!
envy!
they're coming to australia in october
so i get to see them
yay!
and woah.
looks like u had a totally AWESOME summer
and a totally awesome chapter too
gasp
janie!
is she gonna be okay?
drama
gotta love it
yay for the return of jack
can't wait for more!
izzie
9/3/2007 c16 4Pink Secret
Oh my god! We haven't talked in ever! This is an amazing chapter? Remember our conversation with my saying 'You should name the baby Kaetu!'? Aww...man. Janie's having her baby! Yay!
Amazing chapter, darling. So glad you finally updated. Please reply. We haven't talked in ever.
xoxo
4Pink SecretOh my god! We haven't talked in ever! This is an amazing chapter? Remember our conversation with my saying 'You should name the baby Kaetu!'? Aww...man. Janie's having her baby! Yay!
Amazing chapter, darling. So glad you finally updated. Please reply. We haven't talked in ever.
xoxo
9/3/2007 c16 21Faith Adeline
oy vey. All the drama! Poor Charlie :( One thing, remember to specify who's talking. Sometimes it get's a tad confused. Aside from that and a few grammatical errors ( we all make them ) this was a great chapter! I'm so glad you updated and cannot wait for more!
Faith
21Faith Adelineoy vey. All the drama! Poor Charlie :( One thing, remember to specify who's talking. Sometimes it get's a tad confused. Aside from that and a few grammatical errors ( we all make them ) this was a great chapter! I'm so glad you updated and cannot wait for more!
Faith
8/14/2007 c15 5dreamweaver138
hey an update... somewhat... anyway, damn, a writer's block huh? hope you get around that soon. kind of like me, i haven't put a story up for how long. got lazy in the summer and got packed with homework from school, caught a writer's block and am still lazy :|
hey cool, i just realized the story Cold Sober comes out on my b-day (i keep forgetting it's coming up -_- and everyone keeps reminding me) the excerpt sounds good too. i shall read it on thursday. at least i have no school that day.
hope you get past the writer's block (hope i'm not jinxing)
dreamweaver138
5dreamweaver138hey an update... somewhat... anyway, damn, a writer's block huh? hope you get around that soon. kind of like me, i haven't put a story up for how long. got lazy in the summer and got packed with homework from school, caught a writer's block and am still lazy :|
hey cool, i just realized the story Cold Sober comes out on my b-day (i keep forgetting it's coming up -_- and everyone keeps reminding me) the excerpt sounds good too. i shall read it on thursday. at least i have no school that day.
hope you get past the writer's block (hope i'm not jinxing)
dreamweaver138
8/13/2007 c15 21Faith Adeline
take your time, I know how cruel writers block is haha. The excerpt sounds very good, I'll have to check it out. Cant wait for the next chapter :)
Faith
21Faith Adelinetake your time, I know how cruel writers block is haha. The excerpt sounds very good, I'll have to check it out. Cant wait for the next chapter :)
Faith
8/13/2007 c15 myworks87
Actually, I do find this incredibly annoying. There was no point to this update. This information you could put on your profile. I know this sounds completely bitchy. Just being honest.
Actually, I do find this incredibly annoying. There was no point to this update. This information you could put on your profile. I know this sounds completely bitchy. Just being honest.
8/5/2007 c14 K i m m e h
I voted for you [:
Too bad Myrika is in the lead D:
Anywho, maybe it's a good idea to put the voting link here ;]
I voted for you [:
Too bad Myrika is in the lead D:
Anywho, maybe it's a good idea to put the voting link here ;]
8/3/2007 c14 23Kaede Kitsurani
Yes...big bitch. Anyway, it was a cute chapter. Ollie's newfound personality's making me sad. =(
23Kaede KitsuraniYes...big bitch. Anyway, it was a cute chapter. Ollie's newfound personality's making me sad. =(
8/1/2007 c14 Cynical Optimism
wowowowowowowow! i guess one "wow" would suffice but..yeah. lol
echo was amazing...i loved it! so i thot...heck, i definitely need to read into dust...it's friggin amazing too!
the whole turn of the tables (ash turning into the one who has the issues and the one who needs aiden..)that was pretty-friigin-interesting! .
gosherz..the whole thing..i swear it's like i'm addicted to it. i can't wait to read the next chappie and to find out what happens in the end (hopefully they end up together..pretty happily-ever-after-ish, i know...but i'm a sucker for those kind of endings...:D)seriously, after all they've been thru..they'd be great together!
i kinda hated luke..kk..well, i hate him a lot. and i was kinda disappointed in ash for doin the modeling thing..and i was pissed at her for doin wat she did with luke...! aiden's so faithful..even tho they're not really together..arruug! .
sorry..i don't mean to attack luke or ash..but your story and the way u write is so good, that they can trigger these kinds of emotions..lol! :)
anyhoozerz! awesome story,seriously...update soon!
;)
wowowowowowowow! i guess one "wow" would suffice but..yeah. lol
echo was amazing...i loved it! so i thot...heck, i definitely need to read into dust...it's friggin amazing too!
the whole turn of the tables (ash turning into the one who has the issues and the one who needs aiden..)that was pretty-friigin-interesting! .
gosherz..the whole thing..i swear it's like i'm addicted to it. i can't wait to read the next chappie and to find out what happens in the end (hopefully they end up together..pretty happily-ever-after-ish, i know...but i'm a sucker for those kind of endings...:D)seriously, after all they've been thru..they'd be great together!
i kinda hated luke..kk..well, i hate him a lot. and i was kinda disappointed in ash for doin the modeling thing..and i was pissed at her for doin wat she did with luke...! aiden's so faithful..even tho they're not really together..arruug! .
sorry..i don't mean to attack luke or ash..but your story and the way u write is so good, that they can trigger these kinds of emotions..lol! :)
anyhoozerz! awesome story,seriously...update soon!
;)
7/30/2007 c14 10sound of the skies
Hello again, I've been a bit busy lately so I didn't read the rest of Echo or this sequel till now. I must say I am pleasantly surprised at how it's turned out, it's certainly got an interesting plot and you're very good at writing romance, some parts make me go 'aww' inside.
My consolations for your break up, but chin up girl, it's not the end of the world and writing is quite cathartic.
Keep it going, I look forward to reading more. +fav by the way ;)
10sound of the skiesHello again, I've been a bit busy lately so I didn't read the rest of Echo or this sequel till now. I must say I am pleasantly surprised at how it's turned out, it's certainly got an interesting plot and you're very good at writing romance, some parts make me go 'aww' inside.
My consolations for your break up, but chin up girl, it's not the end of the world and writing is quite cathartic.
Keep it going, I look forward to reading more. +fav by the way ;)
7/27/2007 c14 Sam
I'm so glad they are trying to be a couple. I think it is actually neat how you have us readers see the best and worst of Aiden and Ash and still make us cheer for them to have their happy ending.
My suggestion is to deal with Ollie's drug use. Let all his friends confront him and it would be great of you if you could also explain when did Charlie ever have feelings for Ollie. I knew he had feelings for her.
Congratulations on being nominated. I hope you win. I have never read anything from Myrika so don't lose hope. Yeah, breaking up is an inevitable thing in life. I would buy you ice cream if I knew you. Shouldn't you be at Warped Tour with your friends. I'm not a big fan of Warped Tour I prefer small venue concerts. Thanks for forcing yourself to write.
I'm so glad they are trying to be a couple. I think it is actually neat how you have us readers see the best and worst of Aiden and Ash and still make us cheer for them to have their happy ending.
My suggestion is to deal with Ollie's drug use. Let all his friends confront him and it would be great of you if you could also explain when did Charlie ever have feelings for Ollie. I knew he had feelings for her.
Congratulations on being nominated. I hope you win. I have never read anything from Myrika so don't lose hope. Yeah, breaking up is an inevitable thing in life. I would buy you ice cream if I knew you. Shouldn't you be at Warped Tour with your friends. I'm not a big fan of Warped Tour I prefer small venue concerts. Thanks for forcing yourself to write.