
12/28/2007 c12
3Blood Sinister
I love it. It's pretty, in a bittersweet way, and all the words just slot together like they're meant to be there. Which is the scary part.
=]

I love it. It's pretty, in a bittersweet way, and all the words just slot together like they're meant to be there. Which is the scary part.
=]
12/1/2007 c10 Twilight Starr
It is definitely sad when there is no difference to someone. Nice work.
~Twilight Starr~
It is definitely sad when there is no difference to someone. Nice work.
~Twilight Starr~
12/1/2007 c7 Twilight Starr
That's so tragic. Reading these makes me want to cry. Great job on getting your feelings out.
~Twilight Starr~
That's so tragic. Reading these makes me want to cry. Great job on getting your feelings out.
~Twilight Starr~
12/1/2007 c2 Twilight Starr
Good poem. It seems like we always fantasize about things that don't end up happening. Nice work.
~Twilight Starr~
Good poem. It seems like we always fantasize about things that don't end up happening. Nice work.
~Twilight Starr~
5/16/2007 c12
48MarvellousMarvin
omg these were all really amzing! i loved them all! theyre so sad and so blunt in such an effective way. i love their shortness too - and they all have something people can relate to. can't decide about my favourite-theyre all so good!

omg these were all really amzing! i loved them all! theyre so sad and so blunt in such an effective way. i love their shortness too - and they all have something people can relate to. can't decide about my favourite-theyre all so good!
4/28/2007 c11
91fairytale failure
They do seem very cohesive, to me. My favourites were 'That Birthday Surprise' (it made me laugh!) and the last two. I especially loved the line '‘cause people too often mistake tragedy for beauty'; its just so true.

They do seem very cohesive, to me. My favourites were 'That Birthday Surprise' (it made me laugh!) and the last two. I especially loved the line '‘cause people too often mistake tragedy for beauty'; its just so true.