for Muse5/24/2009 c1 
2dragonflydreamer
Nice haiku. I always find writing an interesting topic to write about because it's so relatable on a website about...well...writing ^^
The personification of your "Muse" is also something that a lot of people can relate to, but you really did a good job of making her a very distinct entity. I could almost picture another person there over your shoulder as I was reading this.
I love the second line. It creates such a beautiful image.
Also, the flow's great. The breaks created by the lines are natural, so I can read this through without any awkward pauses.
Very nice work for such a short piece.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
2dragonflydreamerNice haiku. I always find writing an interesting topic to write about because it's so relatable on a website about...well...writing ^^
The personification of your "Muse" is also something that a lot of people can relate to, but you really did a good job of making her a very distinct entity. I could almost picture another person there over your shoulder as I was reading this.
I love the second line. It creates such a beautiful image.
Also, the flow's great. The breaks created by the lines are natural, so I can read this through without any awkward pauses.
Very nice work for such a short piece.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
2/15/2009 c1 80Jazzball
Very nice, mines mia, I like how you used the title as part of the poem... sort of like another line
80JazzballVery nice, mines mia, I like how you used the title as part of the poem... sort of like another line
6/13/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
If only my muse would always be there for me... I just hate it when she goes away... ANYWAY, great haiku!
174a silenced revolutionIf only my muse would always be there for me... I just hate it when she goes away... ANYWAY, great haiku!
4/25/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Good haiku. The second line expresses well the writer's feeling, especially in conjunction with the third. I hope she's "always there". Writer's block sometimes gets in the way. My muse, or the "entity" I think of as that, is a guy. He features in my story "Li", which is very different from this poem, but you might like to look at it. If not, that's fine.
65NemonusGood haiku. The second line expresses well the writer's feeling, especially in conjunction with the third. I hope she's "always there". Writer's block sometimes gets in the way. My muse, or the "entity" I think of as that, is a guy. He features in my story "Li", which is very different from this poem, but you might like to look at it. If not, that's fine.