for Her11/10/2007 c1 
62Oracle of Destiny
Yeah, that's the problem - there is too many ifs and buts in this world, which only makes us regret things in life and believe me, regrets do hurt.
Anyway I liked this and I couldn't help but feel sorry for you as I can sense that you tried your best in your relationship with her and now what's done is done and you can't change anything of the past.
There is a sense of longing and pining for this girl despite the fact you hardly talk to one another.
Great job with this and don't reflect back on the past - that's my opinion anyway :)
62Oracle of DestinyYeah, that's the problem - there is too many ifs and buts in this world, which only makes us regret things in life and believe me, regrets do hurt.
Anyway I liked this and I couldn't help but feel sorry for you as I can sense that you tried your best in your relationship with her and now what's done is done and you can't change anything of the past.
There is a sense of longing and pining for this girl despite the fact you hardly talk to one another.
Great job with this and don't reflect back on the past - that's my opinion anyway :)
5/11/2007 c1 28surrealphobia
The repitition of the word wonder really invokes a lot of thought. This poem draws you in with it's sadness and longing and them makes you regret the mistakes in your life. (Well at least it did for me) Great work, your syntax was awesome. Post more poems you've only got one and I want to read more!
Surreal
28surrealphobiaThe repitition of the word wonder really invokes a lot of thought. This poem draws you in with it's sadness and longing and them makes you regret the mistakes in your life. (Well at least it did for me) Great work, your syntax was awesome. Post more poems you've only got one and I want to read more!
Surreal
5/10/2007 c1 wyckydgoddess
This is beautiful and sad. But I really like it. Oh... and thanks for reading my story!
Much love
This is beautiful and sad. But I really like it. Oh... and thanks for reading my story!
Much love