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5/24/2011 c1 Revenge Is Bliss
Wow. This was... beautiful. Simply amazing. Although you have trouble with spelling, it's still a great poem. I reccomend you get a beta reader, though. Just to make the story look better. (:
4/26/2007 c1 Keara
ive been there, done that and i can completely relate to this poem.

Very sad, but very true.

A lot of poems these days are.

xoxo

~Keara
4/26/2007 c1 298Moon-Chaser
Oh my god, did you steal this from my mind? I have the same feelings for someone else as well. I love the emotions that come from this, and I can relate to the hate taking too much energy, if I hated it would burn me up, so this is how we deal, by writting.

Keep it up.
4/24/2007 c1 71Nyghtraven
Aside from your horrid grammer and spelling, the poem is quite good. Your wording is good, the rhythm is nice. Just work on your grammer, capitalization, and spelling, and you'll have your poem looking as good as it sounds.

~Nyght
4/24/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
Dark and eerie... Can't help but wonder what the story is...

Great job.

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