
5/9/2007 c1
49madi.ao
nice poem. very moving. well done. thanks for your review. once again, great poem.
madi.ao

nice poem. very moving. well done. thanks for your review. once again, great poem.
madi.ao
5/4/2007 c1
495mate.feed.kill.repeat
I like how you repeat the idea of starting again over and over again... I like that idea. You portray real emotion and thought. Keep writing. It's worth reading.
-STIX-

I like how you repeat the idea of starting again over and over again... I like that idea. You portray real emotion and thought. Keep writing. It's worth reading.
-STIX-
5/4/2007 c1
11GeminiJ37
The beginning of a new life and not knowing where the heck you're going, but still willing to try. Good job and keep it up.

The beginning of a new life and not knowing where the heck you're going, but still willing to try. Good job and keep it up.
4/25/2007 c1 xMARY
That was so cool... I have a feeling I know what it was about :P
Wuv ya...
xMARY
That was so cool... I have a feeling I know what it was about :P
Wuv ya...
xMARY