for The Road5/14/2017 c1 Loveyaoi
You can't stop noooooooooooooo Me want MORE. I FREAKING LOVED THIS STORRY WHYYYY PLEASEEEE MORE (sorry if am whining but this was too beautiful, keep up the gud work sis/bro)
You can't stop noooooooooooooo Me want MORE. I FREAKING LOVED THIS STORRY WHYYYY PLEASEEEE MORE (sorry if am whining but this was too beautiful, keep up the gud work sis/bro)
12/2/2016 c1 The Person
I can't believe Ty and Darrien have to move! So sad. And I really liked David, such a shame. Ty, is cute, like almost every teen boy in your stories. I really like the name "Ty", maybe I'll name my son that.
I can't believe Ty and Darrien have to move! So sad. And I really liked David, such a shame. Ty, is cute, like almost every teen boy in your stories. I really like the name "Ty", maybe I'll name my son that.
6/30/2012 c1 Vaydric
Please don't add extra chapters, this is perfect the way it is.
Really lovely writing- very enjoyable.
Please don't add extra chapters, this is perfect the way it is.
Really lovely writing- very enjoyable.
2/4/2012 c1 
8DawnSister
I enjoyed reading this very much. Is it a short story or are you going to write more? It stands alone as a short but there is scope for more. It would be nice to see how everything pans out with David; and also to see how Ty and Darrin's life in Seattle goes.
I'm hoping you will write more but since it was published so long ago maybe you won't.
Thanks for sharing,
DS
8DawnSisterI enjoyed reading this very much. Is it a short story or are you going to write more? It stands alone as a short but there is scope for more. It would be nice to see how everything pans out with David; and also to see how Ty and Darrin's life in Seattle goes.
I'm hoping you will write more but since it was published so long ago maybe you won't.
Thanks for sharing,
DS
1/14/2012 c1 AdriannaRomantica
As usual, you write a story that I can't help but love. I loved how you went back and forth between temporal periods. It was short and sweet; no dirty love scenes, yet the reader could tell they have a strong bond. Nicely done failte200 :)
As usual, you write a story that I can't help but love. I loved how you went back and forth between temporal periods. It was short and sweet; no dirty love scenes, yet the reader could tell they have a strong bond. Nicely done failte200 :)
10/25/2011 c1 4Reeciez
Wow. Well I'm so sorry for the lost friend but it was for the better I guess? One of the most endearing stories I've read so far. I'm not sure what eles to say really!
I love men in suits, too, Ty! ~^,^~
4ReeciezWow. Well I'm so sorry for the lost friend but it was for the better I guess? One of the most endearing stories I've read so far. I'm not sure what eles to say really!
I love men in suits, too, Ty! ~^,^~
8/10/2011 c1 gyvareva
I loved this story. Everything just felt right.
I especially liked how it begins, with nothing but incertainties but the fact that they are together. Even after what happened.
I think I would like to know if David is ever going to "forgive"/accept them, because if he does, it would be a good occasion for a one-shot to show us their day-to-day life together... (if they stay together, which I hope so) If you are up to it, that is ^^
Good job!
I loved this story. Everything just felt right.
I especially liked how it begins, with nothing but incertainties but the fact that they are together. Even after what happened.
I think I would like to know if David is ever going to "forgive"/accept them, because if he does, it would be a good occasion for a one-shot to show us their day-to-day life together... (if they stay together, which I hope so) If you are up to it, that is ^^
Good job!
5/9/2011 c1 6Feeshes
I feel bad for David. XD I would be pissed if this happened to me to...
Of course... My best friend has grown up in a Mormon home, and she's kissed two people in her life, one a gay man (or so he claims, I think he's just an attention whore) and the other a girl.
My bed is a foam thing for camping in a room that is literally the closet under the stairs. (By choice. I love it in there.)
Not to mention that, but my dad's is prison... My mom has a boyfriend, but I don't like 'im much so the only thing that would bother me about him running off is that I'd have to deal with my mother...
Such a loving child am I, no?
6FeeshesI feel bad for David. XD I would be pissed if this happened to me to...
Of course... My best friend has grown up in a Mormon home, and she's kissed two people in her life, one a gay man (or so he claims, I think he's just an attention whore) and the other a girl.
My bed is a foam thing for camping in a room that is literally the closet under the stairs. (By choice. I love it in there.)
Not to mention that, but my dad's is prison... My mom has a boyfriend, but I don't like 'im much so the only thing that would bother me about him running off is that I'd have to deal with my mother...
Such a loving child am I, no?
12/2/2010 c1 20diwu6398
I feel wonderful.
I wrote 3/5 of my essay, and this was the reward for getting that much done. Ha, I've been really procrastinating lately since NaNo has ended.
Have I said that I love your writing style? I liked the italics... I don't really know how to describe them. They're not really dream sequences, but they're not exactly flashbacks either. Um... I sort of agree with your older man/ younger boy thing. I think that's adorable.
20diwu6398I feel wonderful.
I wrote 3/5 of my essay, and this was the reward for getting that much done. Ha, I've been really procrastinating lately since NaNo has ended.
Have I said that I love your writing style? I liked the italics... I don't really know how to describe them. They're not really dream sequences, but they're not exactly flashbacks either. Um... I sort of agree with your older man/ younger boy thing. I think that's adorable.
11/12/2010 c1 Spenser
I don't usually like Lady or the Tiger endings, but I think this one works. I like how you imply that it's not going to be all sunshine and roses and happily-ever-after but it's not going to be all trauma and hardship either.
It feels like a story one would find in an anthology or periodical or something of that sort. Once I started it, I didn't want to stop.
I don't usually like Lady or the Tiger endings, but I think this one works. I like how you imply that it's not going to be all sunshine and roses and happily-ever-after but it's not going to be all trauma and hardship either.
It feels like a story one would find in an anthology or periodical or something of that sort. Once I started it, I didn't want to stop.
9/7/2010 c1 1doublestandard
:) l like it. l like how you do the flashbakes. When Ty told Dave, l laughed. Ah that must have been hard for Dave, walking in like that.
1doublestandard:) l like it. l like how you do the flashbakes. When Ty told Dave, l laughed. Ah that must have been hard for Dave, walking in like that.
6/5/2010 c1 Alex
Ah! I would love it if this wasnt a one shot! I want to know what happens after this! But its a bit irrelevant and left to my own imagination.
I like it very much. Thank you for writing and posting it!
+Alex
Ah! I would love it if this wasnt a one shot! I want to know what happens after this! But its a bit irrelevant and left to my own imagination.
I like it very much. Thank you for writing and posting it!
+Alex
5/22/2010 c1 1reeby10
This was such a sweet story! I love the age gap and how well they still fit together. So sad that David took it badly...
1reeby10This was such a sweet story! I love the age gap and how well they still fit together. So sad that David took it badly...
5/12/2010 c1 ConnorCookie
GAH! I found that sort of...cute...for some reason D:
|"You are gonna. You're SUCH a perv!" Ty laughed again – and then proceeded to tell David - as best he could, and with graphic detail, using his hands as visual aids - EXACTLY what it was 'like'.|
^AND THAT UP THERE ^
Made me laugh SO FRIGGIN HARD.
Fyi.
GAH! I found that sort of...cute...for some reason D:
|"You are gonna. You're SUCH a perv!" Ty laughed again – and then proceeded to tell David - as best he could, and with graphic detail, using his hands as visual aids - EXACTLY what it was 'like'.|
^AND THAT UP THERE ^
Made me laugh SO FRIGGIN HARD.
Fyi.
12/20/2009 c1 Chronically Creative
I really, really enjoyed this. At first I was worried David wouldn't react badly. I really wanted him to freak out, and in the end, you didn't disappoint. :)
I really, really enjoyed this. At first I was worried David wouldn't react badly. I really wanted him to freak out, and in the end, you didn't disappoint. :)