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5/23/2008 c1 3music-is-luv
Man, that is SO fucked, dude. I mean, poor Ty and 'Dare'. Tsk, tsk. Damn homophobes.

Nice story, but it's so sad.

Oh! And by the way, my dad is SO older than you. He's like...54 or something.
5/14/2008 c1 1Felinity
cool story, sad he lost his job but at least their happy now :)
4/19/2008 c1 sick at heart
oh my god, i loved this! it was so good! and i love m/m with an older person and a minor, so it was perfect. thanks!
2/27/2008 c1 17Elkica
To tell you the truth I don't like stories about minors and older man. It just doesn't click with me. But this story was very nicely done. The way the flashbacks and the Ty's travel flowed together and the way the last paragraph has that positive note in it. Very, very nice.
2/23/2008 c1 3KnittingKneedle
okay, first impressions first...I was drawn in by a seemingly non conventional summary.

The first part seemed to give away too much, telling and not showing.

The friendship between David and Ty was cute in the itallics part, but I think Ty should have been more than just a *little* nervous about telling his friend he is gay.

It was pretty awkward to read some of it, and I think that the dialogue could do with a few more tags...some of the words don't have enough weight behind them so the emotion isn't explored.

I liked your descriptions, but to me there weren't nearly enough of them...overall interesting story with an interesting concept
1/7/2008 c1 iwanttodeletethiswtf
OMGosh this is adorable! i think i've read this at least 4 times or started at least. and each time, i never finished it. i went on a rampage tryin to look for it. then finally one day i found it. and i still didn't finish it. and i have THE WORST MEMORY EVER! so i didn't remember that you wrote it, so now i was just lookin at your stories and i found it agen! YAY! lol now i've finished it and this is adorable but it sucks about how david took the whole bff dating dad thing...yea i would probably react the same way. but i don't have a bff...and the closest friend i have to a bff is the biggest homophobe ever. i do kno one kid thats like a bff that's gay tho, too. lol. wow bad visual.kk, i loved this. later!

X's,

-E
12/22/2007 c1 maggiepyro101
cute
11/27/2007 c1 True.Randomness
Such an angs story. I can't tell if I liked it or not though.
8/10/2007 c1 yaoi kitsune
I love your stories, especially the way you put so much detail into them and explore so many different kind of relationships. The seem 'real'. Can't wait to read more
5/13/2007 c1 VocifVehem
Hullo! Betcha didn't think yeh'd see me again, eh? But here I am, reviewing your wonderful stories yet again. (Sniff.) How nostalgic. (I bet you don't even remember who I am. But that's alright! That's alright.)

I'm sorry to say, I haven't read any of your stories in forever. Been busy, I say, and think it's going to be enough. People are starting to miss me all over the net. (That's what happens when a nerd suddenly gets busy in real life.) And unfortunately, I'm probably not going to be able to keep up with most things online even now that I'm aware of it.

Okay, I'm sure you're not interested in that, so I'll get on with reviewing instead. I really liked this story, really did. You're an amazing writer and I wish I could find time to keep up with all your work without feeling stressed about homework and such. (And, I have to start packing and sorting everything in my room, because we're moving!)

Anyway, that's off the subject again. Um. I think David's reaction was pretty fair. I'd flip if I found my best friend in bed with my, ugh, dad. (Especially now since he's still married to mum, but I would've anyway!) Although I don't think I'd tell anybody. I'd probably calm down and let them convince me that it's all right. Hm.

Oh well. It was fun to read and I'm going to start packing now! See you around!

Thematic
4/27/2007 c1 shinneodeus
I already left most of my thoughts in the KP Slash board. So I wil just mention that the their paln seems a bit dodgy. Posing as father and son? Well they better be really private. But sweet story never the less. they felt very real. Taking slowly their sexual activity and in the end it was quite romantic seeing the couple just share a bed. no foreplay just being comfortable enough with each other.
4/27/2007 c1 25Ravyn Starkweather
Wow...I absolutely loved this one, and not just because I like slash AND the older-guy angle, haha.

The separation of the personalities of the characters were flawless. Most one-shots don't have actual pronounced personalities, but this one did.

It was great. I loved it.

-Ravyn.
4/26/2007 c1 springfiry
Well , this isn't the usual stories i like to read..but i took a chance on it , and loved it!
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