
6/18/2009 c17 loveyou
what can i say AWESUM
what can i say AWESUM
6/8/2009 c28
3VanStede
A very nice story, for sure.
Mistakes-free (or nearly) which is very nice, and the plot, along with the characters, was fun.
I'm looking forward to reading the sequel !

A very nice story, for sure.
Mistakes-free (or nearly) which is very nice, and the plot, along with the characters, was fun.
I'm looking forward to reading the sequel !
4/26/2009 c7 Aeryn Macdonald
This is a great story so far! I love Shelby and how she doesn't take shit from anyone :D And i like Christians voice...well, how i imagine it atleast lol
This is a great story so far! I love Shelby and how she doesn't take shit from anyone :D And i like Christians voice...well, how i imagine it atleast lol
4/16/2009 c28 nevershoutnever
WOW. YOUR COMPLETELY AWESOME THE STORY IS SO ORIGINAL AND NICE I LOVE THE CONCEPT OF THE WHOLE THING YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE OR FINISH YOUR OTHER STORIES CAUSE YOUR ARE REALLY GREAT.
WOW. YOUR COMPLETELY AWESOME THE STORY IS SO ORIGINAL AND NICE I LOVE THE CONCEPT OF THE WHOLE THING YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE OR FINISH YOUR OTHER STORIES CAUSE YOUR ARE REALLY GREAT.
4/15/2009 c7 BlueberryMuffinMonster
omg ! i love this chapter ! it's so funny i'm almost on the verge to tears ... HAHAHAHAHAH ! this chapter was awesome ! really love Paul :D
omg ! i love this chapter ! it's so funny i'm almost on the verge to tears ... HAHAHAHAHAH ! this chapter was awesome ! really love Paul :D
4/2/2009 c28 artmagus
o ho ho ho i want to see what she'll do! i 'll go read your other stories or if there is...
o ho ho ho i want to see what she'll do! i 'll go read your other stories or if there is...
3/30/2009 c28 pmcs-09
to say that this was a good read is a total understatement. it's beyond good. no words can express. great job on that. i loved the whole sextuplets idea. i wish to read about each one of them, i hope you could do that :)) i love Mike, so if you ever start a sequel, write about his life first. then Justin, then Paul, then Nicole. Emily won't really need one though i wouldn't mind if you write about them, perhaps their wedding? lol. and Eric. write about him, too. i know this is a lot to ask, but i would really love to read about them. and i'm sure everyone here does, too. :))
anyway, kudos on this. :))
to say that this was a good read is a total understatement. it's beyond good. no words can express. great job on that. i loved the whole sextuplets idea. i wish to read about each one of them, i hope you could do that :)) i love Mike, so if you ever start a sequel, write about his life first. then Justin, then Paul, then Nicole. Emily won't really need one though i wouldn't mind if you write about them, perhaps their wedding? lol. and Eric. write about him, too. i know this is a lot to ask, but i would really love to read about them. and i'm sure everyone here does, too. :))
anyway, kudos on this. :))
3/24/2009 c28
3AJS
Aw, cute ending, haha. I don't really get what exactly Justin did... like in what way did he analyze Shelby for his project? Anyways, I think this is a cute story. Some parts seemed a little immature, like Christian claiming that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with Shelby before they got together, but I think that ultimately by the time they actually had gotten together and he confessed to her that he was in love with her, I think it worked then. I guess it was just that before then, when they had first met, it didn't really seem like he knew her well enough to make that judgment that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with her.
I'm very glad they finally got together though, and that Shelby was able to see past all of her insecurities. One thing that seemd a little inconsistent though was the whole Nicole-Claire status quo thing. In the beginning of the story, you made it seem like Nicole was the main person, and Claire was just her best friend, but then Nicole suddenly dropped out of the picture and you just flipped everything back around.
Anyways though, cute story. :) I thought something had to be wrong for a mother to get anything more than twins, haha, but it's nice as fiction.
- Alyssa

Aw, cute ending, haha. I don't really get what exactly Justin did... like in what way did he analyze Shelby for his project? Anyways, I think this is a cute story. Some parts seemed a little immature, like Christian claiming that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with Shelby before they got together, but I think that ultimately by the time they actually had gotten together and he confessed to her that he was in love with her, I think it worked then. I guess it was just that before then, when they had first met, it didn't really seem like he knew her well enough to make that judgment that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with her.
I'm very glad they finally got together though, and that Shelby was able to see past all of her insecurities. One thing that seemd a little inconsistent though was the whole Nicole-Claire status quo thing. In the beginning of the story, you made it seem like Nicole was the main person, and Claire was just her best friend, but then Nicole suddenly dropped out of the picture and you just flipped everything back around.
Anyways though, cute story. :) I thought something had to be wrong for a mother to get anything more than twins, haha, but it's nice as fiction.
- Alyssa
3/11/2009 c1 ABC123
I've just read the first chapter and have to say I loved it. Wow, amazing. You've got talent.
I've just read the first chapter and have to say I loved it. Wow, amazing. You've got talent.
3/11/2009 c28 Erica71167
Great story! I must share your "weird" sense of humor because there were parts where I was laughing pretty hard. Great job!
Great story! I must share your "weird" sense of humor because there were parts where I was laughing pretty hard. Great job!
3/3/2009 c28
2sunny-raindrop
Haha, great ending! :D It was a sweet story, I very much enjoyed reading it. I liked the idea of sextuplets, that made the story quite original. And I suspected that Justin was working on something in the background, but thought it was just to bring Shelby and Christian together. Your explanation is better, though. :) Congratulations!

Haha, great ending! :D It was a sweet story, I very much enjoyed reading it. I liked the idea of sextuplets, that made the story quite original. And I suspected that Justin was working on something in the background, but thought it was just to bring Shelby and Christian together. Your explanation is better, though. :) Congratulations!
2/19/2009 c26
2oOoTwinedoOo
I loved your story! You're an amazing character writer, not many people have your talent. Thank you for writing such a great story, I enjoyed every chapter

I loved your story! You're an amazing character writer, not many people have your talent. Thank you for writing such a great story, I enjoyed every chapter