for It Was Only a Kiss6/22/2013 c25 
2Epic Asian
Aggrh! I know being insecure and having no self esteem is Shelby's thing but its the end of the story and she's ticking me off.
2Epic AsianAggrh! I know being insecure and having no self esteem is Shelby's thing but its the end of the story and she's ticking me off.
5/26/2013 c28 9AKhwab
GREAT story! I'm SO glad I stumbled upon it. I'd love to see some action between Eric & Nicole. Shane's a bastard. Claire's a bitch. Ugh. Paul's a nice guy :) and please! Write about Justin. I've noticed something though, Emily & Mike are two of the six who appeared the least. And from all their appearances, seems like Emily's a little judgy & cold while Mike is bossy & not so fun.
9AKhwabGREAT story! I'm SO glad I stumbled upon it. I'd love to see some action between Eric & Nicole. Shane's a bastard. Claire's a bitch. Ugh. Paul's a nice guy :) and please! Write about Justin. I've noticed something though, Emily & Mike are two of the six who appeared the least. And from all their appearances, seems like Emily's a little judgy & cold while Mike is bossy & not so fun.
5/26/2013 c23 AKhwab
Gosh! How dumb can Claire get? Just when I was starting to think the high school main cheerleader wasn't a bitch.
Gosh! How dumb can Claire get? Just when I was starting to think the high school main cheerleader wasn't a bitch.
5/26/2013 c20 AKhwab
I'm not having trouble anymore. You are SO funny. I was laughing when Christian got slapped. And I felt guilty when the two men got into a fight.
I'm not having trouble anymore. You are SO funny. I was laughing when Christian got slapped. And I felt guilty when the two men got into a fight.
5/26/2013 c15 AKhwab
Sequels? Sure! If you're up for it. Cos if you force yourself to bring up a love story for them in high school with this same people, the stories may not seem appealing anymore. However, if you play with the timeline a little or something, then it won't be so bad. Ever heard of the Drake Chronicles? I think that's what that series of books is called. I can't remember the author's name. Anyway, the reason I mentioned it was cos, I was starting to feel as if the author was squeesing out things to write for the characters.
Sequels? Sure! If you're up for it. Cos if you force yourself to bring up a love story for them in high school with this same people, the stories may not seem appealing anymore. However, if you play with the timeline a little or something, then it won't be so bad. Ever heard of the Drake Chronicles? I think that's what that series of books is called. I can't remember the author's name. Anyway, the reason I mentioned it was cos, I was starting to feel as if the author was squeesing out things to write for the characters.
5/26/2013 c10 AKhwab
The last part just sucked. They can't remember. All they can do is draw conclusions. What about Shelby's & Paul's grounding? Won't their parents know that the both of them were out?
The last part just sucked. They can't remember. All they can do is draw conclusions. What about Shelby's & Paul's grounding? Won't their parents know that the both of them were out?
5/26/2013 c8 AKhwab
Thanks for the character info at the end. Appreciated it :) good chapter. Well written :)
Thanks for the character info at the end. Appreciated it :) good chapter. Well written :)
5/26/2013 c7 AKhwab
Omg. This chapter was SO funny that it had me sniggering and trying to control my laughter. I like Paul. He's really humourous.
Omg. This chapter was SO funny that it had me sniggering and trying to control my laughter. I like Paul. He's really humourous.
5/26/2013 c5 AKhwab
Eric & Shelby would make a nice pair. They would also make this story a little less cliche. But let's see... :)
Eric & Shelby would make a nice pair. They would also make this story a little less cliche. But let's see... :)
5/26/2013 c4 AKhwab
Learnt so much about Shelby. The second chapter already had me thinking that Shelby was pretty ordinary. She's beautiful but one had to look for it. I didn't know she was attracting guys to her like bees to honey.
Learnt so much about Shelby. The second chapter already had me thinking that Shelby was pretty ordinary. She's beautiful but one had to look for it. I didn't know she was attracting guys to her like bees to honey.
3/22/2013 c28 atlalok33
alright, you have updated this a looonnnggg time ago. but, really wish you make the sequel to this. this story is amazing; i have an unhealthy obsession with it. PLEASE make the sequel soon!
alright, you have updated this a looonnnggg time ago. but, really wish you make the sequel to this. this story is amazing; i have an unhealthy obsession with it. PLEASE make the sequel soon!
3/7/2013 c28 Cindy
Nice story. I would've expected something more dramatic with Jake but whatever. You are a good writer and I'm sure you're going to get better.
Nice story. I would've expected something more dramatic with Jake but whatever. You are a good writer and I'm sure you're going to get better.