for It Was Only a Kiss11/10/2012 c28 killerqueen123
I really loved your story. It was very well written and a fun read. I'm excited to see what else you've wrote!
I really loved your story. It was very well written and a fun read. I'm excited to see what else you've wrote!
10/28/2012 c8 Guest
Your story doesn't have too many characters I love your characters they are all unique and you did a fantastic job creating them
Your story doesn't have too many characters I love your characters they are all unique and you did a fantastic job creating them
10/17/2012 c28 Choukou
This story was cute :) And it made me stay up until 2 am to finish it... not exactly what I had planned for the night, but I just couldn't stop reading it!
This story was cute :) And it made me stay up until 2 am to finish it... not exactly what I had planned for the night, but I just couldn't stop reading it!
10/2/2012 c8 Yokoangeldevil
I love all of these charaters you had created, yes it does kind of come all at you. But I grew to like theme, keep up the good work. I'm hooked, hope you will have more books in the future.
I love all of these charaters you had created, yes it does kind of come all at you. But I grew to like theme, keep up the good work. I'm hooked, hope you will have more books in the future.
9/29/2012 c11 Guest
i really don't like that women blame men for not using a condom BECAUSE i believe women should be responsible when it comes to getting pregnant since they are the ones to actually carry the baby! i am disappointed that shelby is irresponsible and keeps blaming chris as if she was forced into something she didn't want. jeeez.
i really don't like that women blame men for not using a condom BECAUSE i believe women should be responsible when it comes to getting pregnant since they are the ones to actually carry the baby! i am disappointed that shelby is irresponsible and keeps blaming chris as if she was forced into something she didn't want. jeeez.
9/29/2012 c8 Guest
it's really pretty stupid of her to surrender her virginity to someone whom she doesn't have very strong feelings for. if i ever do such a thing, i'd probably feel very dirty after for a very, very long time.
it's really pretty stupid of her to surrender her virginity to someone whom she doesn't have very strong feelings for. if i ever do such a thing, i'd probably feel very dirty after for a very, very long time.
9/26/2012 c28 Elsa
Yay! I just finished reading, I loved the end with the revealing of Justin's true project. I would have liked better ending with only "payback's a bitch" though haha!
Well, as I said before, I liked your story mostly thanks to the many characters, so I was a bit disappointed not to see Adam and to discover that you have stopped writting so no sequel about the others. This is how it is, we always want more, we greedy humans. But still, a big huge mega thanks to you for writting and sharing this story.
Yay! I just finished reading, I loved the end with the revealing of Justin's true project. I would have liked better ending with only "payback's a bitch" though haha!
Well, as I said before, I liked your story mostly thanks to the many characters, so I was a bit disappointed not to see Adam and to discover that you have stopped writting so no sequel about the others. This is how it is, we always want more, we greedy humans. But still, a big huge mega thanks to you for writting and sharing this story.
9/23/2012 c11 Elsa
I like this story, as I liked many others because I love those romantic high school stories that we can find easily on fictionpress.
I like the characters, even the minor ones like Eric or Elliott, the rythm of the story and your writing, but most of all I wanted to say that I really appreciate how you manage to include realistic elements. It makes your story really better! For what I've read, it is a rare quality, and you managed to do it without breaking the rythm of the story or making it too plain! So, I thought I was going to leave a review now, I usually wait to finish the whole story but this chapter was great with that :) And for now, I will continue my reading!
I like this story, as I liked many others because I love those romantic high school stories that we can find easily on fictionpress.
I like the characters, even the minor ones like Eric or Elliott, the rythm of the story and your writing, but most of all I wanted to say that I really appreciate how you manage to include realistic elements. It makes your story really better! For what I've read, it is a rare quality, and you managed to do it without breaking the rythm of the story or making it too plain! So, I thought I was going to leave a review now, I usually wait to finish the whole story but this chapter was great with that :) And for now, I will continue my reading!
8/16/2012 c28 heal me forever
ok ..i read dis after 4 years for ur writing ...16 august 2012 ..nd i am so HAPPY dat i had got a chance to read such a MATSERPEICE ...u r such an phenomeal writer man ...i really loved each chapter to bits
chrstain my fav though :P
as u asked idf squeal i highly recommend JUSTIN coz he is my fav among all he is such so GOOD u see nd ya may be MIKE also but justin to a great extent .
hoping to see a sequeal if u wanted to wite
u r AWESUM writer (:
ok ..i read dis after 4 years for ur writing ...16 august 2012 ..nd i am so HAPPY dat i had got a chance to read such a MATSERPEICE ...u r such an phenomeal writer man ...i really loved each chapter to bits
chrstain my fav though :P
as u asked idf squeal i highly recommend JUSTIN coz he is my fav among all he is such so GOOD u see nd ya may be MIKE also but justin to a great extent .
hoping to see a sequeal if u wanted to wite
u r AWESUM writer (:
8/13/2012 c28 Guest
This is onr of the most amazing stories I read in fictionpress! It was absolutely FANTASTIC! It has a great plot, characters and ending and is well written. I truly loved it and want you to continue reading more of your stories. You are very talented. Again, I LOVED IT!
Sequel? Justin's (my favorite character) POV in college and love maybe? Haha but really, don't give up on writing.
This is onr of the most amazing stories I read in fictionpress! It was absolutely FANTASTIC! It has a great plot, characters and ending and is well written. I truly loved it and want you to continue reading more of your stories. You are very talented. Again, I LOVED IT!
Sequel? Justin's (my favorite character) POV in college and love maybe? Haha but really, don't give up on writing.
8/7/2012 c28 ClosetReader
Whoa, that was a surprise! Great story, would love to read Emily's one next!
Whoa, that was a surprise! Great story, would love to read Emily's one next!
7/18/2012 c7 RubyRed22
Oh... (laughs) My... (laughs) Gosh... I just about died while reading the last scene... That is so hilarious! My family probably thinks I'm insane because I'm laughing so hard. It's even funnier though, because I had a laughing fit exactly like Elliot's once... I got milk everywhere, and it that was when I was at a friend's house with her family! Defs my favourite scene so far. :P
Oh... (laughs) My... (laughs) Gosh... I just about died while reading the last scene... That is so hilarious! My family probably thinks I'm insane because I'm laughing so hard. It's even funnier though, because I had a laughing fit exactly like Elliot's once... I got milk everywhere, and it that was when I was at a friend's house with her family! Defs my favourite scene so far. :P
6/10/2012 c3 eika
umm I'm kinda confused because there are just so many characters in this story but great story so back to reading..
umm I'm kinda confused because there are just so many characters in this story but great story so back to reading..