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4/26/2007 c1 46antigonelives
Not a bad poem, but please proofread before posting!

"skys" - "skies"

"lifes fears" - "life's fears."

Also, watch your metre. The poem, when read aloud, sounds awkward and shaky; this could be amazing if you just took more time to work with it.

~Cristina

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