Just In
for Freedom

6/22/2008 c1 2Itsuyaya
Ohh... Good... ^-^!
6/28/2007 c1 87Kissing Concrete
this is absolutely beautiful. my favorite line is "Let me pass into never" because it can never ben done. i love statements like this that make you think about twisting around words and well-loved phrases yourself. this really reminded me also of the song "Into the Ocean" by Blue October (a really good song by the way). who would have thought that something so beautiful (your poem) could be about something so sad (like death. but you know, from the way this poem is written, it almost makes death seem happy and makes it seem like a release into a higher and happier place, maybe heaven? well, i should probably end this review (its the longest ive ever written and that was meant as a compliment) but amazing job on your poem. *favorites*

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service