for Revive Me Oh Great One7/6/2007 c2 
4Amindaya
I can't decide if she's really desperate for the drugs or if it seems like an okay thing for her to do since she likes him anyway (2 for 1 deal, sorta).
Well, I don't know what the original chapter two was like, but I like this. It's odd that Darek is Danny's brother; I can only imagine the conflict that's going to create in the future.
4AmindayaI can't decide if she's really desperate for the drugs or if it seems like an okay thing for her to do since she likes him anyway (2 for 1 deal, sorta).
Well, I don't know what the original chapter two was like, but I like this. It's odd that Darek is Danny's brother; I can only imagine the conflict that's going to create in the future.
7/6/2007 c1 Amindaya
Haha, you totally rock at summaries. They're funny and interesting, and I clicked on this story first because the title was just...great. Nice sarcasm. Like, the entire writing style just seems sarcastic to me, with the way you use short sentences. Sort of like the character wants to add "duh" to the end of every sentence, but resists. :D And of course that makes for a likeable character.
Haha, you totally rock at summaries. They're funny and interesting, and I clicked on this story first because the title was just...great. Nice sarcasm. Like, the entire writing style just seems sarcastic to me, with the way you use short sentences. Sort of like the character wants to add "duh" to the end of every sentence, but resists. :D And of course that makes for a likeable character.
5/8/2007 c2 3The Royal We
So, I think that this is probably my favorite story of yours, since so far it seems to be a lot darker than Wait For It, which I love, of course. I feel like it will be a lot better when I can read it more continuously, though. Not much seems to be happening so far, except she's sneaking out her window, which she's done in both chapters. Erin seems a little weak willed though. I've never been addicted to drugs, but I've met a lot of people who are recovering, and it seems to me that although Erin regrets trying drugs in the first place, she's not really trying to stop. Mainly, though, I just want more chapters, okay?
3The Royal WeSo, I think that this is probably my favorite story of yours, since so far it seems to be a lot darker than Wait For It, which I love, of course. I feel like it will be a lot better when I can read it more continuously, though. Not much seems to be happening so far, except she's sneaking out her window, which she's done in both chapters. Erin seems a little weak willed though. I've never been addicted to drugs, but I've met a lot of people who are recovering, and it seems to me that although Erin regrets trying drugs in the first place, she's not really trying to stop. Mainly, though, I just want more chapters, okay?
5/8/2007 c2 remae
"He always gets me out of my crappy moods—or maybe that’s just the drugs?"
lol. that made me laugh.
I like it so far. I mean, it kind of creeped me out that she's gonna sleep with the guy to get her drugs, but so far the plot is pretty interesting. Update soon.
"He always gets me out of my crappy moods—or maybe that’s just the drugs?"
lol. that made me laugh.
I like it so far. I mean, it kind of creeped me out that she's gonna sleep with the guy to get her drugs, but so far the plot is pretty interesting. Update soon.
5/8/2007 c2 Sky-Len
hey
just wanted to say that i really like ur idea of drugs and stuff :)
update soon
hey
just wanted to say that i really like ur idea of drugs and stuff :)
update soon
5/4/2007 c1 The Royal We
Wonderfull! I thought that since I loved Wait For It so much, I'd try your other stuff. that seemed to have been a good idea. I like the characters, and how it's all in first person. I want to read more, since not much has had a chance to happen. I can tell I'll be hooked.
Wonderfull! I thought that since I loved Wait For It so much, I'd try your other stuff. that seemed to have been a good idea. I like the characters, and how it's all in first person. I want to read more, since not much has had a chance to happen. I can tell I'll be hooked.
4/30/2007 c3 4catharsis7
I'm glad you gave some background as to how her addiction began. It's kind of weird to that everyone in school knows, usually things like drug addictions are kept quite because it reflects badly on the school and the area. People usually aren't so blatant about discussing it. I do like Darek... probably shouldn't be Danny is a bit overbearing and Darek isn't.
Anyway, I liked the chapter. Could use some more detail, but overall, nice job.
4catharsis7I'm glad you gave some background as to how her addiction began. It's kind of weird to that everyone in school knows, usually things like drug addictions are kept quite because it reflects badly on the school and the area. People usually aren't so blatant about discussing it. I do like Darek... probably shouldn't be Danny is a bit overbearing and Darek isn't.
Anyway, I liked the chapter. Could use some more detail, but overall, nice job.
4/28/2007 c2 FireFallon
And the plot keeps thickening...She gives Erin's a bad name...at least we all aren't druggies...*checks herself*...nope not a druggie :) I'm the good Erin...yay me!...lol anyway love the story update soon!
And the plot keeps thickening...She gives Erin's a bad name...at least we all aren't druggies...*checks herself*...nope not a druggie :) I'm the good Erin...yay me!...lol anyway love the story update soon!
4/27/2007 c1 catharsis7
I liked it, though I didn't expect Erin to sound so... perky. I kind of expected her to be more strung out, especially since she is addicted. Some more detail about setting and such would be nice. Character development as well, like elaborating how smoking marijuana developed into a full-blown heroin addiction. All in all, I think it's a nice start.
I liked it, though I didn't expect Erin to sound so... perky. I kind of expected her to be more strung out, especially since she is addicted. Some more detail about setting and such would be nice. Character development as well, like elaborating how smoking marijuana developed into a full-blown heroin addiction. All in all, I think it's a nice start.