for Of Hilltop Conversations5/8/2007 c1 miliabyntite
You know I like your poetry, Kit, but. I miss your stories. ._.
Also, might want to change the link in your profile, ahaha.
You know I like your poetry, Kit, but. I miss your stories. ._.
Also, might want to change the link in your profile, ahaha.
5/7/2007 c1 TeapotLid
Oh God I love this. I feel bad for not being able to point out exactly why or give reasonable suggestions but I just love this. I'm pretty sure everyone who reads this will feel insanely nostalgic and send you tearful letters of thanks. With flowers. And leaves. With caterpillars on them, singing Jimmy Eat World forlornly.
...You see what this poem is doing to me?
I think the imagery of hilltop conversations, spending hours in weathered chairs, makes me long for some imaginary summer freedom and youth with all my pirate friends...Oh god. I love this. I must go now.
~Susurrus
** OKay, finally, one suggestion - I think 'normalcy' should actually be 'normality'...but that's all. ^^ Thankyou! Your tearful letter of thanks with flowers and leaves with JEW-singing caterpillars shan't take long! ^_^
Oh God I love this. I feel bad for not being able to point out exactly why or give reasonable suggestions but I just love this. I'm pretty sure everyone who reads this will feel insanely nostalgic and send you tearful letters of thanks. With flowers. And leaves. With caterpillars on them, singing Jimmy Eat World forlornly.
...You see what this poem is doing to me?
I think the imagery of hilltop conversations, spending hours in weathered chairs, makes me long for some imaginary summer freedom and youth with all my pirate friends...Oh god. I love this. I must go now.
~Susurrus
** OKay, finally, one suggestion - I think 'normalcy' should actually be 'normality'...but that's all. ^^ Thankyou! Your tearful letter of thanks with flowers and leaves with JEW-singing caterpillars shan't take long! ^_^