for Chinese Lantern4/29/2007 c1 ecwix
Hmm, what struck me right away was that the middle line only seems to have 6 syllables... unlike the 7 traditionally seen in a haiku. Done on purpose?
Interesting imagery :).
Hmm, what struck me right away was that the middle line only seems to have 6 syllables... unlike the 7 traditionally seen in a haiku. Done on purpose?
Interesting imagery :).
4/29/2007 c1 
32Charlotte Makepeace
I loved it. It's simple (...well, haikus are) but i can picture the scene. You used the right words. Well done!
32Charlotte MakepeaceI loved it. It's simple (...well, haikus are) but i can picture the scene. You used the right words. Well done!