7/19/2007 c9 5SerialXLain
xD The POV changes confused me so much. I normally skip over the name, expecting it to just be Luke or Matt...whoever came next. Aidan's POV in there threw me off. xD
"Note to Self: Wow, I was a creepy little kid man." Ahaha!
I liked the chapter. o.O It almost kinda felt like it didn't belong because of the humor/light-heartedness of the other chapters (or maybe it's not supposed to be light-hearted and I just see it that way because I'm weird...) but I definitely liked it. :)
xo
xD The POV changes confused me so much. I normally skip over the name, expecting it to just be Luke or Matt...whoever came next. Aidan's POV in there threw me off. xD
"Note to Self: Wow, I was a creepy little kid man." Ahaha!
I liked the chapter. o.O It almost kinda felt like it didn't belong because of the humor/light-heartedness of the other chapters (or maybe it's not supposed to be light-hearted and I just see it that way because I'm weird...) but I definitely liked it. :)
xo
7/16/2007 c9 Kamiko-Miha
Poor Mark, I can't imagine what I would do if my sister was in a comma...Thank you for the update.
Poor Mark, I can't imagine what I would do if my sister was in a comma...Thank you for the update.
7/11/2007 c8 5SerialXLain
xD I liked the note to self about talking to Aidan about talking to her aunt about the serial killerness. Cute.
Pete and Matt remind me of my friend Matt and his friend Eddie. It's crazy-weird.
"I don’t giggle; hee-hee." That sent me into a round of giggles myself. D: And then when I copy/pasted it...it did it again.
What a weenie. D:
xD I liked the note to self about talking to Aidan about talking to her aunt about the serial killerness. Cute.
Pete and Matt remind me of my friend Matt and his friend Eddie. It's crazy-weird.
"I don’t giggle; hee-hee." That sent me into a round of giggles myself. D: And then when I copy/pasted it...it did it again.
What a weenie. D:
7/10/2007 c9 Chael-Kieran
Hey, that's was a really good chapter. I hope that you update it again soon. You got the emotions out really well, and they are pretty acurate to what someone would be feeling in the situation.
Anyways, if you need a beta, I'd be happy to volunteer for the job... Unless you already have someone lined up for it.
Thanks for updating, it was an awesome chapter..
Hey, that's was a really good chapter. I hope that you update it again soon. You got the emotions out really well, and they are pretty acurate to what someone would be feeling in the situation.
Anyways, if you need a beta, I'd be happy to volunteer for the job... Unless you already have someone lined up for it.
Thanks for updating, it was an awesome chapter..
7/10/2007 c9 Midnights Scream
:) Awwh. cute yet sad. *sniffle* thanks for answering my question, but I think I found something else. when Henry talked about matt being injuried(sp) he said his head wouldn't stop bleeding, but then the doctor said they got his neck to stop bleeding. :) otherwise, I love this story.
:) Awwh. cute yet sad. *sniffle* thanks for answering my question, but I think I found something else. when Henry talked about matt being injuried(sp) he said his head wouldn't stop bleeding, but then the doctor said they got his neck to stop bleeding. :) otherwise, I love this story.
7/10/2007 c9 GrumpyFace
Note to Self: Wow, I was a creepy little kid man - that made me laugh! Even despite how sad the chapter was. Hope Matt wakes up soon :S
Note to Self: Wow, I was a creepy little kid man - that made me laugh! Even despite how sad the chapter was. Hope Matt wakes up soon :S
7/9/2007 c9 Brilliant Demise
Wow... you made me cry...
I can't believe that happened!
I need more... please update soon...
Ever your fan,
Brilliant Demise
Wow... you made me cry...
I can't believe that happened!
I need more... please update soon...
Ever your fan,
Brilliant Demise
7/9/2007 c9 1ngt
Yay new chapter!
Poor Luke. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what comes out of this.
Yay new chapter!
Poor Luke. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what comes out of this.
7/9/2007 c9 ddz008
Oh my! How could you do it? They have to end together? You can't kill him... Poor Matt, he is such a confused boy and Luke maybe even more. He has to realize he loves Matt... and maybe they'll be happy. I feel sorry for Elaine, she must feel so guilty... Update as soon as you can, please! T_T I really want to know what's going to happen :)
Oh my! How could you do it? They have to end together? You can't kill him... Poor Matt, he is such a confused boy and Luke maybe even more. He has to realize he loves Matt... and maybe they'll be happy. I feel sorry for Elaine, she must feel so guilty... Update as soon as you can, please! T_T I really want to know what's going to happen :)
7/9/2007 c9 heartxjelly
Hi, I just started reading your story.
I really like it btw. :)
Um, there was something that kinda confused me.
Are Mark and John twins or did Elaine have Mark and then John?
I just wanted to clear that up.
Thankss
Hi, I just started reading your story.
I really like it btw. :)
Um, there was something that kinda confused me.
Are Mark and John twins or did Elaine have Mark and then John?
I just wanted to clear that up.
Thankss