for Therapy Sessions2/24/2009 c19 ShadowyDecember
Aiden DIED? She just fucking DIED?
Damn...she was my favorite character.
Anyways, good writing.
Luke's too good for Matt though.
And once again...
Aiden DIED?
Aiden DIED? She just fucking DIED?
Damn...she was my favorite character.
Anyways, good writing.
Luke's too good for Matt though.
And once again...
Aiden DIED?
2/10/2009 c19 Anonymous
I loved the story...but I thought by the end of the fanfiction, it was kinda sad when luke let...but still loved the story...hope ya keep writing more fanfics
I loved the story...but I thought by the end of the fanfiction, it was kinda sad when luke let...but still loved the story...hope ya keep writing more fanfics
2/2/2009 c2 boppity boop bop
just posted this anonomously,because it isn't really a REVIEW, just a kind correction,
but on the second to the last sentence,
it should be "brakes" not "breaks."
:]]
just posted this anonomously,because it isn't really a REVIEW, just a kind correction,
but on the second to the last sentence,
it should be "brakes" not "breaks."
:]]
12/18/2008 c19 
6Satan'z Myth
As I was reading the first part, I didn't think it'd end up like this...and the only thing that was echoing through my mind was I.Hate.Her (the her being you..assuming you're a girl..since most slash writers around here are female...if you're not, *sorry!*)! And..then a tear rolled down my eyes. Then a smile..a feeling of happiness. Fairy-tale ending. Picture perfect!
I really enjoyed the story..it was heart-warming, sweet and often..sad. I cried through the chapters where Matt was in coma...and I cried a lot. It was a horrible feeling...
But, after all of this is said...I thoroughly love you for writing this ! C:
6Satan'z MythAs I was reading the first part, I didn't think it'd end up like this...and the only thing that was echoing through my mind was I.Hate.Her (the her being you..assuming you're a girl..since most slash writers around here are female...if you're not, *sorry!*)! And..then a tear rolled down my eyes. Then a smile..a feeling of happiness. Fairy-tale ending. Picture perfect!
I really enjoyed the story..it was heart-warming, sweet and often..sad. I cried through the chapters where Matt was in coma...and I cried a lot. It was a horrible feeling...
But, after all of this is said...I thoroughly love you for writing this ! C:
11/19/2008 c19 71Subbie
Wow. I like the statue.
THEY ARE SUCH BIGHEADED FUCKING IDIOTS! OMFG, I FEEL LIKE SCREAMING AT THEM!
Ok, got my rant out now. It WAS an angst story, after all, I should have expected that. You did the tension and the angst really well, too!
Lee
71SubbieWow. I like the statue.
THEY ARE SUCH BIGHEADED FUCKING IDIOTS! OMFG, I FEEL LIKE SCREAMING AT THEM!
Ok, got my rant out now. It WAS an angst story, after all, I should have expected that. You did the tension and the angst really well, too!
Lee
11/1/2008 c9 Reinamy
This story is just great! I absolutely adore Matt (Luke is also great), and Aidan makes a great sub character! Also, I think its so interesting that Elaine is a satanist. Nice touch there!
I cant wait to see where you take this!
This story is just great! I absolutely adore Matt (Luke is also great), and Aidan makes a great sub character! Also, I think its so interesting that Elaine is a satanist. Nice touch there!
I cant wait to see where you take this!
10/22/2008 c19 nomy
ok..its just so wonderful and heartbreaking at the same time..i really thought you end it with a sad ending but alas a happy ending that fits the story but kinda rushed into it,no?..
i dont know about other readers but i just dont feel the connection for the ending
but for the overall story i just fell truly in love with your story and how you can put the Fuck word nearly in all Matt words at the beginning of the story..LOL..
and
love the small touch of a not perfect ending in Matt Pov as their happy ending starts after 30 years from the day Luke goes to Chicago..but kinda feel cheated when Matt married a Girl ..i thought maybe he just got a girl pregnant and just have a child or whatever..~~coz i just imagine on how Matt personality is a not marrying type of person..;p
ok..its just so wonderful and heartbreaking at the same time..i really thought you end it with a sad ending but alas a happy ending that fits the story but kinda rushed into it,no?..
i dont know about other readers but i just dont feel the connection for the ending
but for the overall story i just fell truly in love with your story and how you can put the Fuck word nearly in all Matt words at the beginning of the story..LOL..
and
love the small touch of a not perfect ending in Matt Pov as their happy ending starts after 30 years from the day Luke goes to Chicago..but kinda feel cheated when Matt married a Girl ..i thought maybe he just got a girl pregnant and just have a child or whatever..~~coz i just imagine on how Matt personality is a not marrying type of person..;p
9/19/2008 c19 4Kia Zi Shiru
I love some of your other stores so I'll read this one and leave you a long review of awsome :P
4Kia Zi ShiruI love some of your other stores so I'll read this one and leave you a long review of awsome :P
7/23/2008 c19 xSadistxFujix
I was afraid they wouldn't end up together! They nearly didn't! I'm so glad they did though. But Matt was stupid. If he would've said he loved him a long time ago they could've been together much longer. I don't think I really liked Aiden. Sad she died though. Great story!
I was afraid they wouldn't end up together! They nearly didn't! I'm so glad they did though. But Matt was stupid. If he would've said he loved him a long time ago they could've been together much longer. I don't think I really liked Aiden. Sad she died though. Great story!
7/20/2008 c19 Keeto
Aw...*sniff* that was such a good story. When I finished chap.18 I was like WTF they're not getting together...why? But the ending was really satisfying and sweet, great job.
Aw...*sniff* that was such a good story. When I finished chap.18 I was like WTF they're not getting together...why? But the ending was really satisfying and sweet, great job.
7/16/2008 c19 kawenchan
i absolutely loved reading this story. i wanted to punch matt when he let luke go without telling him he loved him. at first i thought that they werent going to get together, which made me very sad, especially when matt said hed gotten married. by the way did he get married to sarah? as in his best friend sarah? but then they got back together. yay! it was weird because i started crying at the end. i guess i was just really happy for them. haha im such a dork. :)
i absolutely loved reading this story. i wanted to punch matt when he let luke go without telling him he loved him. at first i thought that they werent going to get together, which made me very sad, especially when matt said hed gotten married. by the way did he get married to sarah? as in his best friend sarah? but then they got back together. yay! it was weird because i started crying at the end. i guess i was just really happy for them. haha im such a dork. :)
7/12/2008 c19 Roman C Lee
Ah . . . oh my fucking god . . . how long has it been since a story made me cry? Well, who cares? Because I'm crying now, and it's bitter sweet and I feel like dieing and jumping with joy at the same time, and I tell you now-these emotions don't go well together. Fuck, oh my god *sniff* I just-I LOVE THIS STORY! I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY! Oh, and now I'm blubbering and I just keep thinking back on the story and OMG *sobs horribly* I'm just so glad they ended up together, omg. Shit, this story is amazing, though it did practically kill me with greif when Luke actually left *sniff* but then, they got back together. THANK FUCKING GOD. I was prepared to go mental, and-and just have a very much OVER-reaction. Thank you for writing this story-thank you, THANK YOU! *hugs* That was just amazing, and now I'm smiling again, YAY!
I have a question: how long after Luke left did it take for him to come back and get back together with Matt? I'm just not exactly sure and I know that if I don't figure it out for sure, I'll never forget this question and I gotta get on with my life, lol. I tend to like, . . . well I'm in love with this story so I'm attatched! lol, this is definately my favorite story ever. Not just on fictionpress-over all the stories I've ever read, this is my favorite. It's beautiful, and I just love it; thanks again! *and the blubbering starts again*
Ah . . . oh my fucking god . . . how long has it been since a story made me cry? Well, who cares? Because I'm crying now, and it's bitter sweet and I feel like dieing and jumping with joy at the same time, and I tell you now-these emotions don't go well together. Fuck, oh my god *sniff* I just-I LOVE THIS STORY! I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY! Oh, and now I'm blubbering and I just keep thinking back on the story and OMG *sobs horribly* I'm just so glad they ended up together, omg. Shit, this story is amazing, though it did practically kill me with greif when Luke actually left *sniff* but then, they got back together. THANK FUCKING GOD. I was prepared to go mental, and-and just have a very much OVER-reaction. Thank you for writing this story-thank you, THANK YOU! *hugs* That was just amazing, and now I'm smiling again, YAY!
I have a question: how long after Luke left did it take for him to come back and get back together with Matt? I'm just not exactly sure and I know that if I don't figure it out for sure, I'll never forget this question and I gotta get on with my life, lol. I tend to like, . . . well I'm in love with this story so I'm attatched! lol, this is definately my favorite story ever. Not just on fictionpress-over all the stories I've ever read, this is my favorite. It's beautiful, and I just love it; thanks again! *and the blubbering starts again*
7/6/2008 c1 4Deadly-moons
I... Think i'm about to cry. I love your story so much. Those 'Note to Self' things where hilarious. And the statue. This was amazing, really.
4Deadly-moonsI... Think i'm about to cry. I love your story so much. Those 'Note to Self' things where hilarious. And the statue. This was amazing, really.