6/11/2008 c19 2Blade-of-Sorrow
this is honest to god the sweetest ending i have ever read i love it sorry about all the herping and bitching about how your story was going but it is alot better thne enything that i could have written
this is honest to god the sweetest ending i have ever read i love it sorry about all the herping and bitching about how your story was going but it is alot better thne enything that i could have written
6/11/2008 c19 2Thread of Life
Aw Aiden. So sad, but those things hapen.
I'm glad they ended up together in the end.
Aw Aiden. So sad, but those things hapen.
I'm glad they ended up together in the end.
6/11/2008 c19 2mia5081
I'm a little sad that Aidan died, but overall I liked the epilogue. It really seemed to fit the rest of the story and I'm so glad they ended up together, even if it did take them awhile to get around to it :D
Great job!
~Mia
I'm a little sad that Aidan died, but overall I liked the epilogue. It really seemed to fit the rest of the story and I'm so glad they ended up together, even if it did take them awhile to get around to it :D
Great job!
~Mia
6/11/2008 c19 cobraqueen17
I really liked thus story, even if I didnt review every chapter it was always the first thing I did when I saw that you updated.
I really liked thus story, even if I didnt review every chapter it was always the first thing I did when I saw that you updated.
6/11/2008 c19 Metalic
Oh fuck that [ Cx. I really liked the story but I'm pissed at the ending at the moment so all I have to say is 'oh fuck that.' It was a good ending... made sense... just... depressing... in a good.
Oh fuck that [ Cx. I really liked the story but I'm pissed at the ending at the moment so all I have to say is 'oh fuck that.' It was a good ending... made sense... just... depressing... in a good.
6/11/2008 c19 4pandasXrobots
aww... that was a beautiful ending.
its sad that aidan died though, she was a nice girl. oh well. oh wait, not in a mean way. not like im throwing her under a bus... *stares*
great ending... i enjoyed it all!
aww... that was a beautiful ending.
its sad that aidan died though, she was a nice girl. oh well. oh wait, not in a mean way. not like im throwing her under a bus... *stares*
great ending... i enjoyed it all!
6/11/2008 c19 3Ty Taco
Ty wants me to make sure you know this is Tex.
An he wants me to say I'm sorry.
So...
I'm sorry.
This is pathetic.
You don't care if I'm sorry.
But he does, so I must say it.
ANYWHO,
I like the ending...I guess.
I don't know.
It seems like you wrote a sad ending, then erased it and decided to put at happy one in.
I mean, c'mon.
You only have two paragraphs AT MOST of them actually being together.
So it seems like you wrote a sad ending, like Luke died in the car with Aiden or something, and then re-wrote it cuz you wanted a happy ending.
I don't know.
I guess it is authors choice and that is your story.
It just seemed...forced.
Like you wanted to make yourself provide a happy ending to please.
I don't know.
I need to stop complaining though.
Cuz you will think I'm a total bitch.
And you will think I didn't like your story.
I LOVED YOUR STORY.
I thought it was great.
But, to truly love something, you have to be willing to admit it's flaws.
And I am admitting it's flaws to you so you can learn from them and improve in the future.
All of my mean bitchiness is just trying to help you become a better writer.
But I completely understand if you just see me as a bitchy queen.
Because...I guess I have come across that way.
And for that...I'm sorry.
Really.
xoxoxo,
Tex
PS-
This is Ty.
He is a moron and never hit the "Submit Review" button.
That last apology, totally him.
I did not tell him to do that.
So...
yea.
PS2-
Ty still.
I loved your story 2.
And I thought the ending was greatness.
:]
I wish you would have left room for a sequel though.
That would have been fun.
:]
xoxoxo,
Ty & Tex
Ty wants me to make sure you know this is Tex.
An he wants me to say I'm sorry.
So...
I'm sorry.
This is pathetic.
You don't care if I'm sorry.
But he does, so I must say it.
ANYWHO,
I like the ending...I guess.
I don't know.
It seems like you wrote a sad ending, then erased it and decided to put at happy one in.
I mean, c'mon.
You only have two paragraphs AT MOST of them actually being together.
So it seems like you wrote a sad ending, like Luke died in the car with Aiden or something, and then re-wrote it cuz you wanted a happy ending.
I don't know.
I guess it is authors choice and that is your story.
It just seemed...forced.
Like you wanted to make yourself provide a happy ending to please.
I don't know.
I need to stop complaining though.
Cuz you will think I'm a total bitch.
And you will think I didn't like your story.
I LOVED YOUR STORY.
I thought it was great.
But, to truly love something, you have to be willing to admit it's flaws.
And I am admitting it's flaws to you so you can learn from them and improve in the future.
All of my mean bitchiness is just trying to help you become a better writer.
But I completely understand if you just see me as a bitchy queen.
Because...I guess I have come across that way.
And for that...I'm sorry.
Really.
xoxoxo,
Tex
PS-
This is Ty.
He is a moron and never hit the "Submit Review" button.
That last apology, totally him.
I did not tell him to do that.
So...
yea.
PS2-
Ty still.
I loved your story 2.
And I thought the ending was greatness.
:]
I wish you would have left room for a sequel though.
That would have been fun.
:]
xoxoxo,
Ty & Tex