
6/26/2007 c1
332smile for the sunshine
Wow; that was cool. It's nice to see another Christian. I usually don't write from exact verses, but it's good that you do. I wrote things like, "Crimson Tears from Calvary" and "Passion" but not from a specific verse. Just a specific event. Probably the most important one to our existence...well, eternally anyways. But going back on topic (yes, I tend to ramble and lose my original idea...) your poem was excellent. Very well written. The message was well conveyed. Keep up the great work! =]

Wow; that was cool. It's nice to see another Christian. I usually don't write from exact verses, but it's good that you do. I wrote things like, "Crimson Tears from Calvary" and "Passion" but not from a specific verse. Just a specific event. Probably the most important one to our existence...well, eternally anyways. But going back on topic (yes, I tend to ramble and lose my original idea...) your poem was excellent. Very well written. The message was well conveyed. Keep up the great work! =]
4/29/2007 c1
72Earthbound Angel 49
not usually my prefered reading material but I still like this alot. It flows well and keeps it gentle meaning without losing one to the other.

not usually my prefered reading material but I still like this alot. It flows well and keeps it gentle meaning without losing one to the other.