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4/30/2007 c1 5Raspberry Twirl
you conjure up very odd images, but very strong and beautiful ones all the same. thank you for posting this extraordinary poem!
4/30/2007 c1 4Subtle Fighter
Pretty good. Lot of nice images. My favorite is the first line.
4/29/2007 c1 30JordanLynn
This is a very moving poem. It's short and right to the point, it reads well. I'm afraid I can't really give you a critique on it though because I see nothing wrong with it. Just continue cultivating your talent.
4/29/2007 c1 8rhyddid
I love this poem!

the imagery is really excellent and the story is quite intrigueing!

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