for Daddy Set the Tree on Fire4/30/2007 c1 
5Raspberry Twirl
you conjure up very odd images, but very strong and beautiful ones all the same. thank you for posting this extraordinary poem!
5Raspberry Twirlyou conjure up very odd images, but very strong and beautiful ones all the same. thank you for posting this extraordinary poem!
4/29/2007 c1 30JordanLynn
This is a very moving poem. It's short and right to the point, it reads well. I'm afraid I can't really give you a critique on it though because I see nothing wrong with it. Just continue cultivating your talent.
30JordanLynnThis is a very moving poem. It's short and right to the point, it reads well. I'm afraid I can't really give you a critique on it though because I see nothing wrong with it. Just continue cultivating your talent.