for From the Heart Part I4/30/2007 c1 
11PocoSnow15
Okay, I'll just first say that I suck at giving constructive criticism, so do you mind when really fluffy review? Well, you're gonna get one anyway. This was so well done! Seriously, it sent shivers through me. I love fire, and how you mentioned love sounds a lot like myself. I feel exactly like this, it's so well written. Great job!
11PocoSnow15Okay, I'll just first say that I suck at giving constructive criticism, so do you mind when really fluffy review? Well, you're gonna get one anyway. This was so well done! Seriously, it sent shivers through me. I love fire, and how you mentioned love sounds a lot like myself. I feel exactly like this, it's so well written. Great job!
4/30/2007 c1 49The Reverse Edge Blade
I liked it! The way you put down your words was great, it made it so clear what you want to say! The shortness of the poem was nice as well; you hadn't written more than was necessary for the message to get out. Als0, I liked how you wrote how you had both hatred and love inside of you. Since these two are strongly in contrast to each other, it gave the poem such a beautiful tone! Truly a great poem! I'll be in touch!
THe Reverse Edge Blade
49The Reverse Edge BladeI liked it! The way you put down your words was great, it made it so clear what you want to say! The shortness of the poem was nice as well; you hadn't written more than was necessary for the message to get out. Als0, I liked how you wrote how you had both hatred and love inside of you. Since these two are strongly in contrast to each other, it gave the poem such a beautiful tone! Truly a great poem! I'll be in touch!
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