for Off the Page6/27/2007 c8 Mean titan
I loved it, It was amazing!
I loved it, It was amazing!
6/27/2007 c2 Mean titan
Wow, It would be pretty cool if that could really happen.
Wow, It would be pretty cool if that could really happen.
6/25/2007 c8 
11effection
Wow. I'm absolutely shocked. The entire idea of this story is completely surprising yet relatible and I loved how you ended it. So haunting and amazing. Great job.
11effectionWow. I'm absolutely shocked. The entire idea of this story is completely surprising yet relatible and I loved how you ended it. So haunting and amazing. Great job.
5/30/2007 c8 12elisefey
I LOVED this! Oh my word, it's fantastic. I can't tell you the number of times I've thought through this kind of scenario myself and come to similar conclusions. The ending (especially that last line) is perfect.
Right from the very beginning of the story, your narrative voice completely drew me in; I didn't want to stop reading. The voice was slightly shakey when Casey first starts interacting with Dorian as though you, like Casey, didn't quite no what to do with him to calm him down, but you pulled it all back together once they made the decision to go to the party. Like just about everyone else on FP (including myself) you could benefit from having someone proof-read for verb tenses and punctuation, etc, but ultimately that's not that big a deal as you've got the rest of it (narrative, characterization, plot) down pat for this story.
Seriously, I loved it. It was entertaining and meaningful all at once. Great job.
12elisefeyI LOVED this! Oh my word, it's fantastic. I can't tell you the number of times I've thought through this kind of scenario myself and come to similar conclusions. The ending (especially that last line) is perfect.
Right from the very beginning of the story, your narrative voice completely drew me in; I didn't want to stop reading. The voice was slightly shakey when Casey first starts interacting with Dorian as though you, like Casey, didn't quite no what to do with him to calm him down, but you pulled it all back together once they made the decision to go to the party. Like just about everyone else on FP (including myself) you could benefit from having someone proof-read for verb tenses and punctuation, etc, but ultimately that's not that big a deal as you've got the rest of it (narrative, characterization, plot) down pat for this story.
Seriously, I loved it. It was entertaining and meaningful all at once. Great job.
5/27/2007 c8 28Erisah Mae
This story is completely and totally awesome!
IN some parts it was simply hilarious, in others the turmoil between characters was gripping, and in others still, this story was just plain old sweet.
I loved your authoress character- I could really empathise with her- being able to write your own romantic hero into reality would make the whole finding a partner shebang so much less difficult... although perhaps not if said partner was like Dorian;)...
And the reactions of Dorian to his surroundings made this story extremely credible and thus drawing me in to the point that I couldn't put this down.
I love your work!
Erisah
p.s. Feel free to swing by my profile and read some of my stuff- I'd really appreciate your opinion!
28Erisah MaeThis story is completely and totally awesome!
IN some parts it was simply hilarious, in others the turmoil between characters was gripping, and in others still, this story was just plain old sweet.
I loved your authoress character- I could really empathise with her- being able to write your own romantic hero into reality would make the whole finding a partner shebang so much less difficult... although perhaps not if said partner was like Dorian;)...
And the reactions of Dorian to his surroundings made this story extremely credible and thus drawing me in to the point that I couldn't put this down.
I love your work!
Erisah
p.s. Feel free to swing by my profile and read some of my stuff- I'd really appreciate your opinion!
5/10/2007 c8 1Antonia Gardiner
Great story! I loved the way it ended and I am looking forward to reading more of your stories :)
1Antonia GardinerGreat story! I loved the way it ended and I am looking forward to reading more of your stories :)
5/7/2007 c8 Snow Wolf Alpha
Chapter 7 was very hard to read as well, it made me feel sad and relieved at the same time.
It was a nice ending that rounded off a story that teaches personal growth and acceptance.
It was a pleasure reviewing.
Chapter 7 was very hard to read as well, it made me feel sad and relieved at the same time.
It was a nice ending that rounded off a story that teaches personal growth and acceptance.
It was a pleasure reviewing.
5/5/2007 c6 Snow Wolf Alpha
Awesome, 2 chapters.
Hmm, I can't help but wonder if Cassandra isn't the reason why he thinks she's familiar but something to do with her being his author. It'd be a drag if it was Cassandra.
Uh oh, Dorian going to learn the truth, Casey may have to return his memories sooner than expected.
Excellant couple of chapters.
Can't wait for the next chapters.
Awesome, 2 chapters.
Hmm, I can't help but wonder if Cassandra isn't the reason why he thinks she's familiar but something to do with her being his author. It'd be a drag if it was Cassandra.
Uh oh, Dorian going to learn the truth, Casey may have to return his memories sooner than expected.
Excellant couple of chapters.
Can't wait for the next chapters.
5/4/2007 c6 2Call me Mars
Oh. OH no. OH MY WORD. Uh oh. @_@ This is bad, BAD news, missy! @_@
Well, he was bound to find out the truth sooner or later, i just hope he won't get outta control or vanish in front of her! @_@ NYOO, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
2Call me MarsOh. OH no. OH MY WORD. Uh oh. @_@ This is bad, BAD news, missy! @_@
Well, he was bound to find out the truth sooner or later, i just hope he won't get outta control or vanish in front of her! @_@ NYOO, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
5/3/2007 c4 17Mabisco
AH i'm still so excited
and i was wondering, when he goes to the party
is he going to have a fake name?
she could like...convince him it's for safetly measures or wahtever
but i'm sure you've already thought of that one
17MabiscoAH i'm still so excited
and i was wondering, when he goes to the party
is he going to have a fake name?
she could like...convince him it's for safetly measures or wahtever
but i'm sure you've already thought of that one
5/3/2007 c4 19Hydie
*gasping* my word. WOW.
Great writing by the way. So far I've just been spazzing about the plot, but you really DO write well.
19Hydie*gasping* my word. WOW.
Great writing by the way. So far I've just been spazzing about the plot, but you really DO write well.
5/3/2007 c4 Snow Wolf Alpha
I'm really enjoying this and I love how fast the chapters come out, you must be talented.
I still don't agree with this whole making him forget scenerio and now she's gotten into an even bigger muddle now.
But as long as the truth comes out eventually and somehow this story has a happy ending then thats cool.
Love It!
Look forward to the next chapter.
I'm really enjoying this and I love how fast the chapters come out, you must be talented.
I still don't agree with this whole making him forget scenerio and now she's gotten into an even bigger muddle now.
But as long as the truth comes out eventually and somehow this story has a happy ending then thats cool.
Love It!
Look forward to the next chapter.
5/2/2007 c3 1Antonia Gardiner
I love your story so far and your style of writing. The idea is very original...hopefully you will post another chapter soon :)
1Antonia GardinerI love your story so far and your style of writing. The idea is very original...hopefully you will post another chapter soon :)
5/2/2007 c3 11wizkid08
I truly, truly love this story. Please update soon. It's awesome. Who hasn't wanted to have a character they've created come to real life? And the problem about your character, what was her name? Well, anyway, the problem about your character wanting to keep Dorian around but also knowing that it's wrong...but also knowing that he's a fucking character in the BOOKS she's been writing, so how can any of it matter anyway, since he's not real?
It's wonderful. Thanks for writing this.
11wizkid08I truly, truly love this story. Please update soon. It's awesome. Who hasn't wanted to have a character they've created come to real life? And the problem about your character, what was her name? Well, anyway, the problem about your character wanting to keep Dorian around but also knowing that it's wrong...but also knowing that he's a fucking character in the BOOKS she's been writing, so how can any of it matter anyway, since he's not real?
It's wonderful. Thanks for writing this.