6/2/2007 c1 Reen
Ah, this sounds pretty much like a prologue with hints of continuation. (I mean, this story seems to occur in the middle of a main story, so I suppose there's pretty much to write about the past of the two characters and their future, isn't it?) And had I not known that this is a story, I would have thought that you're writing your diary, there's so much emotions poured into it that I felt as though you're one of the main character. (I hope not, cause knowing you, your stories, though intriguing, usually end up angsty, and I definitely do not want that to happen in your real life.) anyway, I look forward to more chapters from you!