for but musings6/11/2007 c1 
63lackluster
i can relate to this so well. especially the first stanza. everyone can relate to those last lines in that stanza-that makes this poem great. it's quite a little something. it's an everyday kind of poem with the soul of words that can last a couple lifetimes. if i'm not making any sense, i'm sorry...it's a wonderful poem and that's the end of it. :)
63lacklusteri can relate to this so well. especially the first stanza. everyone can relate to those last lines in that stanza-that makes this poem great. it's quite a little something. it's an everyday kind of poem with the soul of words that can last a couple lifetimes. if i'm not making any sense, i'm sorry...it's a wonderful poem and that's the end of it. :)
5/5/2007 c1 the naked civil servant
oh wow.
there is something so perfect about travelling musings in any circumstance, but this...
this is amazing.
the first stanza has such powerful imagery - so relatable and gorgeous - "poets might have sat & slept here... temptresses with redred nails"...
it is wonderous and it is going on my favourites list, yes yes.
oh wow.
there is something so perfect about travelling musings in any circumstance, but this...
this is amazing.
the first stanza has such powerful imagery - so relatable and gorgeous - "poets might have sat & slept here... temptresses with redred nails"...
it is wonderous and it is going on my favourites list, yes yes.
5/1/2007 c1 879Moondog Dozier
The scene decription and tone of this work well to draw the reader into the situation. I like how you've seperated "I", in the first stanza, with the "you", in the second stanza. This makes the entire scene more relatable for the reader. Very well written.
879Moondog DozierThe scene decription and tone of this work well to draw the reader into the situation. I like how you've seperated "I", in the first stanza, with the "you", in the second stanza. This makes the entire scene more relatable for the reader. Very well written.