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6/12/2007 c1 69Professional Dreamer
God... That's creepy. This one speaks directly to me. I know someone like this. E. Very good.
5/7/2007 c1 73ten pts above average
this is neat...

ps-thanks for the review
5/6/2007 c1 169MallowsWins
Interesting. This could refer to one person or to men as a whole. I personally think it's about a single one man, but I didn't write this, so who knows? Anyway, I thought this was well written and I did enjoy it. It felt disjointed, but in a way that worked for the haiku.
5/2/2007 c1 33Chameleon81
Very nice indeed. Intriguing. Thought provoking. I liked it.
5/1/2007 c1 322Basara
hm... intruiging... hm... the 'evilness' of man?

5/1/2007 c1 42Kicking Poe
a really cohesive haiku, all the parts work together well to create a very clear idea of the 'he' you are describing. makes me think of drowning and self-destruction. cool - I like it a lot. cheers.
5/1/2007 c1 306Ashelin
I'm not very good at haiku, but I still enjoyed this. The last line was intriguing and made me think a lot. Great job.

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