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3/11/2009 c1 173Little girl Big world
Aw this is very sad. It was good though. I liked these lines, "What struggle we make to live

How good a brand new day tastes

The welcome of soft beds"

Good job
5/22/2007 c1 56felicia13
Wow. Heartbreaking, truly, Bread. It's just so oddly poignant and depressing all at once. Like, I'm going to make you cry and slam a life lesson on you while you're having an emotional breakdown. And then you do.

Quite, quite inspiring (more in a literary sense than anything else) and decidedly beautiful.

Felicia.
5/2/2007 c1 33WyrdWolf
Strong sense of sadness in this. Overpowering. Very strong poem; very strong emotion.

Wolfie

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