
3/11/2009 c1
173Little girl Big world
Aw this is very sad. It was good though. I liked these lines, "What struggle we make to live
How good a brand new day tastes
The welcome of soft beds"
Good job

Aw this is very sad. It was good though. I liked these lines, "What struggle we make to live
How good a brand new day tastes
The welcome of soft beds"
Good job
5/22/2007 c1
56felicia13
Wow. Heartbreaking, truly, Bread. It's just so oddly poignant and depressing all at once. Like, I'm going to make you cry and slam a life lesson on you while you're having an emotional breakdown. And then you do.
Quite, quite inspiring (more in a literary sense than anything else) and decidedly beautiful.
Felicia.

Wow. Heartbreaking, truly, Bread. It's just so oddly poignant and depressing all at once. Like, I'm going to make you cry and slam a life lesson on you while you're having an emotional breakdown. And then you do.
Quite, quite inspiring (more in a literary sense than anything else) and decidedly beautiful.
Felicia.