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for four ten am, and i'm alone again

4/7/2008 c1 IndiaLikeTheCountry
I love this, I really like how it flows, and hopw you tell the story.

It's kind of sad, but not self-pitying =)
8/19/2007 c1 14kit feral
what a perfect little scene.

"sometimes it’s nice to pretend that you’re more in love with me than you actually are"

how many times have I done that? a lot. have I ever managed to create something like this to describe it? nope.

beautiful.
7/8/2007 c1 19lastchance02
Having nothing helpful to say, I'll just say that your work is always so admirable and

never disappointing.
5/6/2007 c1 73Jezsh
Fantastic. I like the way it's almost unfinished, stops while the night is still going on. There's just something about your style that draws me in and I love it.
5/5/2007 c1 88multiples of six
This feels so real & true. It made me sad.. especially the relationship of the first line to the title. Very nice..
5/2/2007 c1 myno
I like it.

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