
4/7/2008 c1 IndiaLikeTheCountry
I love this, I really like how it flows, and hopw you tell the story.
It's kind of sad, but not self-pitying =)
I love this, I really like how it flows, and hopw you tell the story.
It's kind of sad, but not self-pitying =)
8/19/2007 c1
14kit feral
what a perfect little scene.
"sometimes it’s nice to pretend that you’re more in love with me than you actually are"
how many times have I done that? a lot. have I ever managed to create something like this to describe it? nope.
beautiful.

what a perfect little scene.
"sometimes it’s nice to pretend that you’re more in love with me than you actually are"
how many times have I done that? a lot. have I ever managed to create something like this to describe it? nope.
beautiful.
7/8/2007 c1
19lastchance02
Having nothing helpful to say, I'll just say that your work is always so admirable and
never disappointing.

Having nothing helpful to say, I'll just say that your work is always so admirable and
never disappointing.
5/6/2007 c1
73Jezsh
Fantastic. I like the way it's almost unfinished, stops while the night is still going on. There's just something about your style that draws me in and I love it.

Fantastic. I like the way it's almost unfinished, stops while the night is still going on. There's just something about your style that draws me in and I love it.
5/5/2007 c1
88multiples of six
This feels so real & true. It made me sad.. especially the relationship of the first line to the title. Very nice..

This feels so real & true. It made me sad.. especially the relationship of the first line to the title. Very nice..