for Anything Can Happen6/22/2007 c2 
7yarrowicefrost
Aww that was a great story! I’m sticking it in my faves for sure.
It was well-written, no grammatical errors and the whole camp atmosphere was different from the mostly high-school ones in stories I’ve read on just gave it such a summery feel, y’know.
I’ll admit I was kinda hoping they would get together at the end but I liked how this was more realistic and more about the importance of friendship than anything else.
The City of Lights thing sounded like fun. I almost wished I could have a go too. Bit confusing in the beginning but it made sense after a while.
So all in all, awesome story you got here :)
I j u s t realised you wrote this other great story I read today...so I’m off to review that now.
7yarrowicefrostAww that was a great story! I’m sticking it in my faves for sure.
It was well-written, no grammatical errors and the whole camp atmosphere was different from the mostly high-school ones in stories I’ve read on just gave it such a summery feel, y’know.
I’ll admit I was kinda hoping they would get together at the end but I liked how this was more realistic and more about the importance of friendship than anything else.
The City of Lights thing sounded like fun. I almost wished I could have a go too. Bit confusing in the beginning but it made sense after a while.
So all in all, awesome story you got here :)
I j u s t realised you wrote this other great story I read today...so I’m off to review that now.
5/20/2007 c2 15Point Zero
Great story.
When someone writes a story in first person, they have to give that character a voice, this is especially imporant when more then one POV's are being used. I think you gave both Casey and Tyler differnet voices, which were very good. And this isn't the typical "friends falling for eachother" type story that it could've been. Those stories are all too common and this was a nice change.
So, I give the story a five out of five.
15Point ZeroGreat story.
When someone writes a story in first person, they have to give that character a voice, this is especially imporant when more then one POV's are being used. I think you gave both Casey and Tyler differnet voices, which were very good. And this isn't the typical "friends falling for eachother" type story that it could've been. Those stories are all too common and this was a nice change.
So, I give the story a five out of five.