for The Return5/12/2007 c4 
7Vampire Kuroken
Wow, I'm really enjoying this for sure. Sorry I'm not gonna comment on chapter 4, because I got confused and actually read that before chapter 3. ^_^' I am such a dits. But anyways, you're sister screws with your computer too? Mine destroyed my Wordpad document, yet she yells at me for changing the backround everynow and then. Sorry... done ranting. In a nutshell your story is going good. Only a few errors. But, what can one expect? I have plenty of my own. Keep up the good work!
I am but a simple bat,
Kuroken
7Vampire KurokenWow, I'm really enjoying this for sure. Sorry I'm not gonna comment on chapter 4, because I got confused and actually read that before chapter 3. ^_^' I am such a dits. But anyways, you're sister screws with your computer too? Mine destroyed my Wordpad document, yet she yells at me for changing the backround everynow and then. Sorry... done ranting. In a nutshell your story is going good. Only a few errors. But, what can one expect? I have plenty of my own. Keep up the good work!
I am but a simple bat,
Kuroken
5/8/2007 c3 Vampire Kuroken
I really liked it and it's hard for me to like a story, exspecially when I'm half asleep while reading it. I really did enjoy it and I can't wait for you to update. ^.^ I'm a very happy girl. Sorry I'm acting stupid. Anyway. Love it and keep up the good work
- Kuroken
I am but a simple bat
I really liked it and it's hard for me to like a story, exspecially when I'm half asleep while reading it. I really did enjoy it and I can't wait for you to update. ^.^ I'm a very happy girl. Sorry I'm acting stupid. Anyway. Love it and keep up the good work
- Kuroken
I am but a simple bat