for The Night Fighters5/9/2007 c1 
54wishing.on.echoes
I really like this one. I especially like your reference to the stars and "her otherworldly sense of hate for someone she loved equally as much". This is really clever. It's crazy good.
54wishing.on.echoesI really like this one. I especially like your reference to the stars and "her otherworldly sense of hate for someone she loved equally as much". This is really clever. It's crazy good.
5/5/2007 c1 1Gemma Lovell
I really like this poem, especially your use of adjectives and similies, and I think the description takes it from good to great. Nice work!
1Gemma LovellI really like this poem, especially your use of adjectives and similies, and I think the description takes it from good to great. Nice work!