for red wine eden5/4/2007 c1 
8The Angry Black Woman
I like it. It's short and straightforward, yet mysterious at the same time. I love the stanza pattern and you're descriptive words. The last two lines are great, also. The title is really good. I like your style.
8The Angry Black WomanI like it. It's short and straightforward, yet mysterious at the same time. I love the stanza pattern and you're descriptive words. The last two lines are great, also. The title is really good. I like your style.