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8/19/2007 c1 Musehic
That's a really nice story. I love the way you describe everyone in the bus. well done!
5/5/2007 c1 11MusicalPhoenix
Its a good story, honestly.

I liked it. sorry i really don't know how to help improve it though sorry i kinda like how the way it is though

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