for The Road to Virlinshar6/17/2009 c10 
1Sweet Lady Genevieve
Huh... you know, now that I think about it, how does Marin know what color eyes she has? If she can't remember anything, and she's blind, how would she know her eyes are "dull unblinking gray" or however you said it? I'm going to assume you did that on purpose ... Marin just gets more and more mysterious!
Ugh, you haven't updated in forever so I can assume you won't any time soon... But, please? The suspense is killing me. I must have more!
1Sweet Lady GenevieveHuh... you know, now that I think about it, how does Marin know what color eyes she has? If she can't remember anything, and she's blind, how would she know her eyes are "dull unblinking gray" or however you said it? I'm going to assume you did that on purpose ... Marin just gets more and more mysterious!
Ugh, you haven't updated in forever so I can assume you won't any time soon... But, please? The suspense is killing me. I must have more!
6/17/2009 c9 Sweet Lady Genevieve
Well, that answers my question about the Namer... sort of. I'm still curious about him/her.
Poor Marin. Sounds like something's really tormenting her. What is it?
Well, that answers my question about the Namer... sort of. I'm still curious about him/her.
Poor Marin. Sounds like something's really tormenting her. What is it?
6/17/2009 c8 Sweet Lady Genevieve
Holy crap! Plot twist? This gets better and better; I love Marin more with every chapter!
Holy crap! Plot twist? This gets better and better; I love Marin more with every chapter!
6/17/2009 c7 Sweet Lady Genevieve
Whoa! Who is the Namer? Is he the person that rules the Guardians? Is he God?
And I kinda expected Adin to be in love with Ulja.. I mean, seriously. :P But, he handled it kind of immaturely. I think it was a petty, desperate kind of "in love". He's falling for Marin, I think; and it'll be a much more mature love, the kind that a man, not a boy, has for a woman! :D
Whoa! Who is the Namer? Is he the person that rules the Guardians? Is he God?
And I kinda expected Adin to be in love with Ulja.. I mean, seriously. :P But, he handled it kind of immaturely. I think it was a petty, desperate kind of "in love". He's falling for Marin, I think; and it'll be a much more mature love, the kind that a man, not a boy, has for a woman! :D
6/17/2009 c6 Sweet Lady Genevieve
No! Ulja can't leave! She was so sweet and good... poor Adin... speaking of which, I think he likes Marin. But doesn't know it yet. :]
No! Ulja can't leave! She was so sweet and good... poor Adin... speaking of which, I think he likes Marin. But doesn't know it yet. :]
6/17/2009 c5 Sweet Lady Genevieve
Oh, what's going to happen next? So suspensful! Cool names, Byouu and Xinabi and stuff, for the towns.
Oh, what's going to happen next? So suspensful! Cool names, Byouu and Xinabi and stuff, for the towns.
6/17/2009 c4 Sweet Lady Genevieve
Wow! Marin is just full of surprises. I must say you've got me hooked...
Wow! Marin is just full of surprises. I must say you've got me hooked...
6/17/2009 c3 Sweet Lady Genevieve
Even though he's a real pussy, I like Adin. His mom sounds like a loser.
Even though he's a real pussy, I like Adin. His mom sounds like a loser.
6/17/2009 c2 Sweet Lady Genevieve
Not all blind people have gray eyes. I like how you gave Maren gray eyes though. She seems intriguing.
Not all blind people have gray eyes. I like how you gave Maren gray eyes though. She seems intriguing.
6/21/2008 c10 6Carmel March
Even though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchEven though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!
~Carm~
6/13/2008 c10 20Twilight Starr
Great job at painting a picture. Nice twist at the end. Nice work.
Have a fantastic day and an amazing summer.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrGreat job at painting a picture. Nice twist at the end. Nice work.
Have a fantastic day and an amazing summer.
~Twilight Starr~
3/10/2008 c9 6Carmel March
Absolutely wonderful. I love every bit of this story :)
Keep up the fantastic work!
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchAbsolutely wonderful. I love every bit of this story :)
Keep up the fantastic work!
~Carm~