5/7/2007 c1 322Basara
wow... emocative...

nice..

5/6/2007 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
Wow. I love this. Its so beautiful, yet so heartbreaking. You've said everything you need to say, and something so powerful, in so few words. Nicely done!

5/5/2007 c1 58Next Exit
so disappointing... the feeling of the poem, not the poem itself. you did a wonderful job. :P