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5/12/2008 c1 Hazelnut Romance
i feel so sorry for anna. *sob*
4/22/2008 c1 8heartfeltlove
Aww. Poor Anna, I can only imagine how it would feel to go through that.

But this was written fantastically! ^.^
12/25/2007 c1 47Helizabeth
that's sad. really sux for Anna. or you. not sure. i liked the end, it was really deep. how long can you live a lie before believing it yourself?
5/13/2007 c1 SMALLwhitelies
nice nice nice. but i have to ask, what's with the names? they could be made up but you put anna, and it makes me feel like you're talking about me. which i know you're not, but it's weird. but it's very good. i'm really liking these. are you going to continue with anna and daniel?
5/7/2007 c1 Omorose Ryuu
Very nice. I feel that last part sometimes... that i'm tired of pretending.
5/6/2007 c1 remae
The last line was perfect, it really wrapped everything up. Your word choice was really good and I loved the imagery.
5/6/2007 c1 akb-inactive
I wish I could give a better review, because most of my reviews are quite lenghty with constructive criticism, but wow... this was just so good. The emotion and everything!

I'm just rambling now. Gah. But seriously, good job. :D
5/5/2007 c1 1jade-dusk
been there done that... Good job you did I think, I liked it and could relate to it. Keep writing, its really good!

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