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8/4/2007 c3 871no.peace.los.angeles
Haha, this is cute. I like how you associate lateness with how you look. Very cute. Keep writing! :)
7/31/2007 c15 18Sir Scott
Is that a good feeling or a bad one?

~SirScott
7/30/2007 c15 33WyrdWolf
Concise and wonderful. Glad to see more of these define: haiku (senryu)!

Wolfie
6/9/2007 c13 41sarah1491
ahah, i like this one :) peanut butter and jelly sandwiches. :)
5/21/2007 c3 sarah1491
it's amazing how you can make a haiku so descriptive
5/10/2007 c14 18Sir Scott
I always say that beauty is skin deep, but ugly is to the bone.

~SirScott
5/10/2007 c14 33WyrdWolf
Yipe! Graphic. Powerful in that way, though. This one is a strong haik-senryu. ^^

Wolfie
5/10/2007 c4 136Elliptical Shapes
Nothing to do with your heart. More of a pants-area thing.
5/10/2007 c3 Elliptical Shapes
Spelt bulge wrong
5/10/2007 c2 Elliptical Shapes
crack?
5/10/2007 c1 Elliptical Shapes
Excellent spew about dimension 4.

Yay Baxter. The time bender.

Alan/gelina
5/8/2007 c13 18Sir Scott
peanut and jelly is a classic lunch. I hope you remember to eat your apple.

~SirScott
5/8/2007 c9 Sir Scott
Criticism makes us grow. Well, at least, that's what my old man says.

~SirScott
5/8/2007 c6 829Anaare
I have not read them all, but I think it's a nice little collection of peculiar and beautiful haiku's. I most enjoyed the Water-trilogy. Truly wonderful work and I commend you.

And of course thank you for the constant reviews!
5/7/2007 c2 871no.peace.los.angeles
Aww, sad, do you not like slam poetry? Because I love it. It's one of my favorite forms of poetry. Completely free verse and completely stream-of-consciousness. But to each their own. I like the little tweak you did here. Nice. Keep writing! :)
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