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5/25/2007 c1 i'd delete this if possible
The last line kills me. I love the idea of the poem- the moon in pain whenever a kite falls. And the desire to have someone care if you fell too. It's beautiful.

By the way, thanks for the review. It meant a lot to me, especially for that poem.
5/6/2007 c1 306Ashelin
A very interesting poem. I loved the ending. Great job.
5/6/2007 c1 13sunscraped
The comparison is something I'd have never come up with. It's pretty original, and that's very pleasing to see.

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