for on the verge5/25/2007 c1 i'd delete this if possible
The last line kills me. I love the idea of the poem- the moon in pain whenever a kite falls. And the desire to have someone care if you fell too. It's beautiful.
By the way, thanks for the review. It meant a lot to me, especially for that poem.
The last line kills me. I love the idea of the poem- the moon in pain whenever a kite falls. And the desire to have someone care if you fell too. It's beautiful.
By the way, thanks for the review. It meant a lot to me, especially for that poem.
5/6/2007 c1 
13sunscraped
The comparison is something I'd have never come up with. It's pretty original, and that's very pleasing to see.
13sunscrapedThe comparison is something I'd have never come up with. It's pretty original, and that's very pleasing to see.