for Touch the Sky10/18/2010 c1 
2InebriatedOne
Well written.However I must say reading how beautiful and perfect they are was rather off putting, and not only beautiful..perfect, the perfect car...the everything...then she goes to a party tht sound like a high school beer bash...sigh.
2InebriatedOneWell written.However I must say reading how beautiful and perfect they are was rather off putting, and not only beautiful..perfect, the perfect car...the everything...then she goes to a party tht sound like a high school beer bash...sigh.
2/6/2008 c1 Angel Fire Wings
Heyy! It's me! I've just remembered about this account XD. Yeah, I know, I've got the memory of a goldfish.. but... I thought I'd read something and I came across your profile and I thought 'Hey!' Yup, and now here I am, reviewing as I read. XD.
Nice title by the way.
Wow, impressive! Nice use of vocab and that, awesome beginning!
"There were so many labels, splitting people from people. In the end, we were just that. People, human." SO true.
FALL OUT BOY! Love the song. And band.
Aw! She likes him, doesn't he? XP
“Gah, take the fries. I don’t need them anyway. This burger is too big for its own good.” XD I wouldn't dream of giving away fries. M.
Aww! I hope they get together, they're cute together.
Oh wow! You're such a good writer when it comes to explaining what people are feeling! (i envy you..
Heyy! It's me! I've just remembered about this account XD. Yeah, I know, I've got the memory of a goldfish.. but... I thought I'd read something and I came across your profile and I thought 'Hey!' Yup, and now here I am, reviewing as I read. XD.
Nice title by the way.
Wow, impressive! Nice use of vocab and that, awesome beginning!
"There were so many labels, splitting people from people. In the end, we were just that. People, human." SO true.
FALL OUT BOY! Love the song. And band.
Aw! She likes him, doesn't he? XP
“Gah, take the fries. I don’t need them anyway. This burger is too big for its own good.” XD I wouldn't dream of giving away fries. M.
Aww! I hope they get together, they're cute together.
Oh wow! You're such a good writer when it comes to explaining what people are feeling! (i envy you..
10/7/2007 c1 26Scooz
AWE! ^^ That was really cute. I liked how he was talking at the end as if he was seeing someone else, lol. The poem at the end was awesome. This was very well written, I really liked it.
26ScoozAWE! ^^ That was really cute. I liked how he was talking at the end as if he was seeing someone else, lol. The poem at the end was awesome. This was very well written, I really liked it.
5/15/2007 c1 5Heatless Flame
Hey, not half bad. The two were both a little perfect, but at least his cockiness and her shyness hid that a little. Nice theme behind it.
5Heatless FlameHey, not half bad. The two were both a little perfect, but at least his cockiness and her shyness hid that a little. Nice theme behind it.
5/10/2007 c1 19Serom Kim
I liked this story a lot. It was a lot different from the other story that you're writing, Tip of the Iceberg.
Your writing style is a lot different from that story than in this one, but I guess it's because of what you're trying to get through in the two stories. Good start and I can't wait to read more.
19Serom KimI liked this story a lot. It was a lot different from the other story that you're writing, Tip of the Iceberg.
Your writing style is a lot different from that story than in this one, but I guess it's because of what you're trying to get through in the two stories. Good start and I can't wait to read more.
5/10/2007 c1 39EmoAssassin
This was SO good! Couple of spelling mistakes...but its not like i dont make them (only about every single day!). Just makes me depressed at my lack of a love life like that. :(
Oh well, one can dream...
~Crispee, emoassassin, or whatever other thing i call myself
(i need more pseudonyms)
39EmoAssassinThis was SO good! Couple of spelling mistakes...but its not like i dont make them (only about every single day!). Just makes me depressed at my lack of a love life like that. :(
Oh well, one can dream...
~Crispee, emoassassin, or whatever other thing i call myself
(i need more pseudonyms)
5/7/2007 c1 6Shadowed and Shattered
I love this story! And, you dedicated it to me! YAY!
Wow, what an amazingly long review...
6Shadowed and ShatteredI love this story! And, you dedicated it to me! YAY!
Wow, what an amazingly long review...