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5/10/2007 c1 11Ginger Mae
This is very beautiful...in my opinion it captures the feeling of searching for what your purpose is, and the beauty of life. I loved the last two lines, they wrapped it up so very nicely. Keep writing!
5/8/2007 c1 87R.J. Crosbie
I haven't talked to you in a long time! But I can relate to this poem in all its forms-especially about the pounding. There were times I've felt like I could stop the sky, but at the same time I feel like I'm put together wrong. It's a bit different from the style you usually write in. Talk to you later!
5/7/2007 c1 6laura pamela
hey hot song :D

very nice, love it

deep, dude.

check my pieces out - cya!

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