for Forgotten6/8/2007 c23 iwishillwilluponyou
gahh there's a cliffhanger every single time ;_; it drives me crazy! this is a wonderful story
gahh there's a cliffhanger every single time ;_; it drives me crazy! this is a wonderful story
6/4/2007 c22 
3readingismything
i like the plot..and the way you write...i am totally hooked to your story...its infuriating that dani is still thinking abt brad..wanna knw what's happenin with her? and what will happ. now?...update soon!
3readingismythingi like the plot..and the way you write...i am totally hooked to your story...its infuriating that dani is still thinking abt brad..wanna knw what's happenin with her? and what will happ. now?...update soon!
6/2/2007 c21 8squiggle-line
Uh...not to be mean or anything but I still don't buy any of it. I understand that this is an illegal project and regular procedures do not apply...but I don't think that automatically means whatever happens is realisitic. Bradley is turning out to be really creepy...I don't really understand why Danielle feels conflicted either.
8squiggle-lineUh...not to be mean or anything but I still don't buy any of it. I understand that this is an illegal project and regular procedures do not apply...but I don't think that automatically means whatever happens is realisitic. Bradley is turning out to be really creepy...I don't really understand why Danielle feels conflicted either.
5/29/2007 c20 vio923
You love cliffhangers!
Regardless of how she may or may not feel about Brad, he broke the law. Kidnapping is a federal offense and she does not have the option of saying that she doesn't want to press charges against him - it is out of her hands.
Having said that, since she does have "feelings" for Brad she will be reluctant to say anything to "hurt" me. I feel bad for her. She has to tell the truth - otherwise she can be charged with perjury.
She also has to decide what she wants to do about Brad and Nathan. Brad will probably have to spend some time in jail but then... anything in possible after that. If she truly does not "love" Nathan she needs to end - the longer she postpones that, the more that Nathan will be hurt and be angry.
Hope you post more soon!
You love cliffhangers!
Regardless of how she may or may not feel about Brad, he broke the law. Kidnapping is a federal offense and she does not have the option of saying that she doesn't want to press charges against him - it is out of her hands.
Having said that, since she does have "feelings" for Brad she will be reluctant to say anything to "hurt" me. I feel bad for her. She has to tell the truth - otherwise she can be charged with perjury.
She also has to decide what she wants to do about Brad and Nathan. Brad will probably have to spend some time in jail but then... anything in possible after that. If she truly does not "love" Nathan she needs to end - the longer she postpones that, the more that Nathan will be hurt and be angry.
Hope you post more soon!
5/22/2007 c17 vio923
They are somewhat naive. Before in the hotel room and now - they should get help - FBI - someone - even her "father" didn't want to mess with the law and let her go.
They are somewhat naive. Before in the hotel room and now - they should get help - FBI - someone - even her "father" didn't want to mess with the law and let her go.
5/21/2007 c16 Lady R
This review is actually for the last three chapters. Wow! To think that I was feeling sorry for the Marc character...anyway, I think the pov that you are writing is fine, and I don't think you have to go in depth about the experiment, but that's just my opinion.
This review is actually for the last three chapters. Wow! To think that I was feeling sorry for the Marc character...anyway, I think the pov that you are writing is fine, and I don't think you have to go in depth about the experiment, but that's just my opinion.
5/20/2007 c15 vio923
At first I felt sorry for Marc/Brad - now it seems that he is the worst of the bunch!
At first I felt sorry for Marc/Brad - now it seems that he is the worst of the bunch!
5/20/2007 c15 Addie W
Oh, that evil, evil man. He needs to be the one out of the picture for good.
Update again soon, please!
Addie
Oh, that evil, evil man. He needs to be the one out of the picture for good.
Update again soon, please!
Addie
5/20/2007 c1 1guess who's back babies
You missed some puncuation but no one's perfect. also when you the narrator calls her Gabriella and then he calls her Gabby confused me for a little bit. I don't know if that happened to other people but I wanted to tell you.
So uhh...what's gonna happen? XD Is she being poisoned or used for something? Are her memories fake?
1guess who's back babiesYou missed some puncuation but no one's perfect. also when you the narrator calls her Gabriella and then he calls her Gabby confused me for a little bit. I don't know if that happened to other people but I wanted to tell you.
So uhh...what's gonna happen? XD Is she being poisoned or used for something? Are her memories fake?