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10/1/2007 c1 96SedateOperateCREMATE
YOU ARE SCRUFFY. I HATE YOU, YOU CAN DO IT. PUT YOUR BACK IN TO IT.

BECAUSE I CAN DO, SO PUT YOUR ASS INTO IT. GONE DO IT.
5/9/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Not bad. I think I get an image of the emotion, the helplessness, you're talking about, that of an introspective philosopher in a house of brutes. The rhythm changes; in the beginning it is very defined, and then it transitions to a less rhythmic more old, almost Psalmic-sounding cadence. I like "We helplessly invert common creativity –" and the half-explanation following it. The apparent centerpiece " Reality’s reality is real,/But realistic reality is an utter lie" is unclear and could be interpreted different ways, but it is also thought-provoking, kinda intriguing, like a spiral stair.
5/9/2007 c1 11A Dark Ray of Hope
wow. i can definitely relate to this one. great job! ^_^

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