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11/15/2007 c1 7RaiMidori
Well done. I do applaud you.

Lovely imagery and the like, I especially loved the metaphors. My favourite line turned out to be the last one- astonishing and beautiful.

Have you been writing for long?

Keep it up :)
9/28/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Interesting poem.

I like the title.

I can't see anything that needs improvement.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a wonderful day. :)

~Twilight Starr~
7/10/2007 c1 16Prisoner of Dreams
Very very nice imagery... my favorite lines are:

"You can keep me pinned, because it’s easier to tease

One hundred miles away with your whisper on the breeze."

This is beautiful... ^_^
5/15/2007 c1 829Anaare
Simply a wonderful poem. Beautiful imagery, with vert fitting and natural rhyming. A few of your punctuation choices I didn't truly like, but that's a very minor qualm. So, I commend you on a wonderful poem. Well done, indeed!

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