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5aedidabThis is a unique and refreshing approach to a tired subject. And I can understand your emotions and the situation with out knowing much about it at all. I like the mood...
5/10/2007 c1 8Writtenvery nice. I like! "bathe in blood" came off a bit heavy though.
5/9/2007 c1 13Shadow WhirlwindThat was just really beautiful. I loved the way you wrote it.
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