for You Were the Sun6/27/2007 c1 
182Jason Daniels
nice job kiddo, its painful to read but i still like it alot.
laterz,
dan
182Jason Danielsnice job kiddo, its painful to read but i still like it alot.
laterz,
dan
6/5/2007 c1 13Pyreflei
Sarah, dear, I still love you. Did this person dump you? Need me to go punch 'em? Call me if you need, you know I'm here. I wait for your messages, you have my e-mail and I hope to hear back from you about this soon.
Loves,
Ayaerhis ^u^
13PyrefleiSarah, dear, I still love you. Did this person dump you? Need me to go punch 'em? Call me if you need, you know I'm here. I wait for your messages, you have my e-mail and I hope to hear back from you about this soon.
Loves,
Ayaerhis ^u^
5/10/2007 c1 24thecolourgrey
Great imagery. Lovely nature references. I didn't like the flow of the poem that much, but it is still good.
24thecolourgreyGreat imagery. Lovely nature references. I didn't like the flow of the poem that much, but it is still good.