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57empathic life
How on earth did I miss all these great poems?
This one in particular really... I don't know, struck me. It was so beautifully crafted and timed... It seems like a rather intricate love poem at the beginning, and then you twist it into something entirely different... Stunning, Felicia.
57empathic lifeHow on earth did I miss all these great poems?
This one in particular really... I don't know, struck me. It was so beautifully crafted and timed... It seems like a rather intricate love poem at the beginning, and then you twist it into something entirely different... Stunning, Felicia.
6/29/2007 c1 15fallin4ualwayz
I absolutely love this poem! its so sweet and so powerful. its going in my favourites list!
15fallin4ualwayzI absolutely love this poem! its so sweet and so powerful. its going in my favourites list!
6/2/2007 c1 136Elliptical Shapes
Something sexy about this. You're a dark horse you are, Baxter. A multi-dimensional Baxterial fog, shrouding a sparkly black diamond.
Alan/gelina.
136Elliptical ShapesSomething sexy about this. You're a dark horse you are, Baxter. A multi-dimensional Baxterial fog, shrouding a sparkly black diamond.
Alan/gelina.
5/30/2007 c1 8kaorayen
Let me just say: Super super super good!
I really liked the metphors. I've never thought of those objects that way before. It also has an...I don't know...deep quality, for lack of a better word. The adjectives are really meaningful too. Loved the last paragraph.
8kaorayenLet me just say: Super super super good!
I really liked the metphors. I've never thought of those objects that way before. It also has an...I don't know...deep quality, for lack of a better word. The adjectives are really meaningful too. Loved the last paragraph.
5/26/2007 c1 55Snow and Spindrift
this is well done, i like the concept- beauty is too often only skin deep.
snow and spindrift
ps. i DOMINATE at the ruler game... ahaha sort of :)
55Snow and Spindriftthis is well done, i like the concept- beauty is too often only skin deep.
snow and spindrift
ps. i DOMINATE at the ruler game... ahaha sort of :)
5/14/2007 c1 829Anaare
I very much liked the lenght of the stanza's, it made the poem more effective. A beautiful poem, it is. There's some wonderfully striking imagery to be found in these words.
And I do see the likeness with no.peace.los.angeles's style. Quite good work, indeed! Well done.
829AnaareI very much liked the lenght of the stanza's, it made the poem more effective. A beautiful poem, it is. There's some wonderfully striking imagery to be found in these words.
And I do see the likeness with no.peace.los.angeles's style. Quite good work, indeed! Well done.
5/11/2007 c1 4Sakka-Fenikkusu
Well, Fee... this is... interesting...
Honestly - didn't like it as much as your other stuff. But, the imagery in the first few verses was very nice.
Are you in love? If so... TELL ME!
Sakka-Fenikkusu
4Sakka-FenikkusuWell, Fee... this is... interesting...
Honestly - didn't like it as much as your other stuff. But, the imagery in the first few verses was very nice.
Are you in love? If so... TELL ME!
Sakka-Fenikkusu
5/11/2007 c1 38DeathMetal18
"I want to peel
the skin back from
your bones
and see if
your beauty
only goes that deep."
This part freaked me out at first, until I re-read it. I was thinking homicidal much? I liked this, besides the murderous line. I think you really have something going here. Time to Yoda this shit, Awsome writer you are. ^ ^ This is definatly your strong point;Poetry I mean, not Yoda-ing things. The raw emotions and honesty is what really made this poem shine. At first it was a content little light, but with the emotion it became the intense sun. Kinda corny but it was the only way I could think of putting this up. Goddammit now I'm rambling and making a long ass review. Fuck, more rambling! Damn my need to type!
-Twilight Wolf
By the By, Havent been reviewing in a while so You are going to be recieving many reviews from me now. ARGH, more rambling.^ ^
38DeathMetal18"I want to peel
the skin back from
your bones
and see if
your beauty
only goes that deep."
This part freaked me out at first, until I re-read it. I was thinking homicidal much? I liked this, besides the murderous line. I think you really have something going here. Time to Yoda this shit, Awsome writer you are. ^ ^ This is definatly your strong point;Poetry I mean, not Yoda-ing things. The raw emotions and honesty is what really made this poem shine. At first it was a content little light, but with the emotion it became the intense sun. Kinda corny but it was the only way I could think of putting this up. Goddammit now I'm rambling and making a long ass review. Fuck, more rambling! Damn my need to type!
-Twilight Wolf
By the By, Havent been reviewing in a while so You are going to be recieving many reviews from me now. ARGH, more rambling.^ ^
5/10/2007 c1 2Sir Scott
It like a longer version of the last thing I read. If you really love someone you never have to ask if its temporary.
~SirScott
2Sir ScottIt like a longer version of the last thing I read. If you really love someone you never have to ask if its temporary.
~SirScott
5/10/2007 c1 33WyrdWolf
I very much like the first half of this; the sepcific details of the body with the italicized metaphors-very cool, very strong. And the final line, 'looking glass heart', was very nice. *applause*
Wolfie
33WyrdWolfI very much like the first half of this; the sepcific details of the body with the italicized metaphors-very cool, very strong. And the final line, 'looking glass heart', was very nice. *applause*
Wolfie
5/10/2007 c1 58Next Exit
how very romantic! haha, and you most definetley captured te features of a swimmer. my own love is a swimmer.
"bearing all
the burdens of forever"
i like that line.
great piece. :)
58Next Exithow very romantic! haha, and you most definetley captured te features of a swimmer. my own love is a swimmer.
"bearing all
the burdens of forever"
i like that line.
great piece. :)
5/10/2007 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Oh my God, I don't even know what to say, I'm so touched. I'm almost crying. As a writer, and someone who takes writing VERY seriously, to have someone like my own poetic style enough to imitate it is just amazing. It's all I could have ever asked for. Thank you. And now for the poem. It really does do a good job of mimicking my style. :) I like how I get this visual of the person from the eyes down, like I'm looking the person up and down. I am loving the alliteration towards the end ("swimmer shaved and woman waxed"), but I'm assuming that was intentional because you know how much I love the alliteration. The stanza that starts "I want to peel" might be my favorite. You just amaze me. You have no idea how much this meant to me. Thank you again. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesOh my God, I don't even know what to say, I'm so touched. I'm almost crying. As a writer, and someone who takes writing VERY seriously, to have someone like my own poetic style enough to imitate it is just amazing. It's all I could have ever asked for. Thank you. And now for the poem. It really does do a good job of mimicking my style. :) I like how I get this visual of the person from the eyes down, like I'm looking the person up and down. I am loving the alliteration towards the end ("swimmer shaved and woman waxed"), but I'm assuming that was intentional because you know how much I love the alliteration. The stanza that starts "I want to peel" might be my favorite. You just amaze me. You have no idea how much this meant to me. Thank you again. Keep writing! :)