
8/25/2007 c1
612simpleplan13
I've never heard the song, but I like your poem.. the movie reference was cute and I like the tone.. using sweetie and honey and that ending kinda takes away the innocence that we all attribute to her, which is an interesting idea.. great piece

I've never heard the song, but I like your poem.. the movie reference was cute and I like the tone.. using sweetie and honey and that ending kinda takes away the innocence that we all attribute to her, which is an interesting idea.. great piece