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9/22/2018 c15 Acie
It has been 11 years yet the author never returned...
2/18/2018 c15 Nikki
Damn you stopped write this story I love it so much and wish you continue to write more chapter on this story :(
8/9/2017 c15 KarasunoFan
I am such a fool for reading this! No update since 2008, man oh man it was great. Wish it would be continued :(
8/4/2014 c15 thoi
This is not a review. It is a plea. Please update really soon! I love this story! Keep up the good work! Waiting. . .
10/9/2013 c15 Stormynighttrue
Oh man I started reading this story ages ago! any chance of an update?
9/21/2013 c15 brinalovesyouxx
OMG can you please update soon?! This is so good! Ahhhh
9/18/2013 c15 Guest
I know...My guest name isn't very creative, but what can I say? I'm a sucker for smiley faces :) :) :) :) SEE? Anywho, I loved reading this story and was wondering:are you still going to finish it!? I REALLY want to read more because it's just so dang good ;). PLEASE UPDATE-but if you don't want to, I understand...Just wanted to let you know I reaalllyyyy enjoyed reading every bit of each and every chapter. Cheesy, but that's just me. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) Woohoo! Smiley faces rock!
7/15/2013 c2 1Unxious Custard
Some really good dialogue here. Also, your writing is well constructed, with just the right proportion of explanaton and dialogue. I have a little problem with your characters though. At the moment they are very much cliche characters lacking depth and shadow. Paige in particular struck me as a bit of a cardboard cut out. That said, I find the plot interesting, and the build up of anticipation excellent. Good writing. I would appreciate a review of my story Psychics v Terrorists, as I always welcome feedback from good writers. I think sharing makes you a better writer.
7/15/2013 c1 Unxious Custard
Hi, I read a couple of your reviews, which intrigued me, so here I am reading your story. I like your premise - not just your average poor girl, but one whose mother is an actual whore. In this sentence: Fiona Hartley was the woman that had... I believe you should use Fiona Hartley was the woman who. As I recall from an English teacher I'd much rather forget, that is for things, who is for people. I loved this sentence: Rynne Hartley had inherited her mother's good looks, but thanks to her mother's reputation, she was unable to take advantage them. It had me chuckling for a long time. I enjoyed the anticipation of Hayden's plan, and look forward to reading more about it.
3/27/2013 c15 Kbelle1
Please update! Story is great!
1/19/2013 c15 HeadOverHeelsInHate
Arggg! This is a fuming amazing story and you just stopped? I know it's been years since you lasted updated and probably even looked at the story, but please finish it! It's written amazingly well and I really, really want to find out what happens to Rynne and Hayden! They're so cute! They just need to get together and accept the past. It would be cool if Dion slowly started to become friends with Rynne, even just tentative friends where they bond just enough to understand each other a little better over something like a band, an instrument or a game of chess. Paige is cool too, I like how she's genuinely starting to see the how compassionate Rynne is. And there are so many things left undone between Rynne and Hayden. You still haven't told the readers exactly why Hauden hates Fiona. And Hayden has yet to be awed by Rynne's talent with the cello! This story is awesome! So what I'm trying to say is; PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AND CONTINUE THIS STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE INISH THIS EPIC STORY! Pretty please with yummy stuff on top! :P
1/2/2013 c15 f0r3v3rstr0n9
YOU CANNOT STOP NOW! Seriously. I am going to die of a tragic heart attack if you never finish the book! I JUST LOVE IT SO MUCh! /3 If your not going to finish it could you maybe (please?) send me an outline of what would of happend? (:
12/16/2012 c15 5Juliet Scar
Omg this is pretty amazing! Uhem, REALLY AMAZING! Its sad you didnt finished it though! :'( Hopefully... yet? Just hoping though. Great job on it!
10/14/2012 c15 foreternity
i love the whole story! even though its missing a lot of chapters...:( will you ever update again?
8/25/2012 c15 x3xJOJOx3x
Really great story and I do hope u get this. The story had to much potential for drama and angst and happy ending for it to go. Your writting is amazing and captures my attention immediatly! I love the story pleasedont give up! :)
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