for Lonely11/20/2007 c1 
19postcards from italy
i liked this poem a lot :D
your writing style is great, it was really sad, almost made me feel depressed.
the rhyming was great but i found the ending a little weak, but i'm not one to talk =D
overall this was a great poem :D
- pretty yuina
P.S.: thanks for reviewing, i hope you continue reading
19postcards from italyi liked this poem a lot :D
your writing style is great, it was really sad, almost made me feel depressed.
the rhyming was great but i found the ending a little weak, but i'm not one to talk =D
overall this was a great poem :D
- pretty yuina
P.S.: thanks for reviewing, i hope you continue reading
10/22/2007 c1 11Elle dont tu lis les histoires
so emo... :(
not much more to say, really.
i like how it rhymes tho
11Elle dont tu lis les histoiresso emo... :(
not much more to say, really.
i like how it rhymes tho
9/23/2007 c1 15Amei666
You are so EMO... You now have no right to insult me anymore on that subject...
Anyway, good emotional poem, it makes me feel depressed ^^ Seriously, I didn't know you could write poetry (and emo to boot!) so, yeah...
15Amei666You are so EMO... You now have no right to insult me anymore on that subject...
Anyway, good emotional poem, it makes me feel depressed ^^ Seriously, I didn't know you could write poetry (and emo to boot!) so, yeah...
9/22/2007 c1 5YoungInside
This is quite a powerful piece. I enjoyed reading it, although I found the ending a little.. abrupt. The rhyming isn't bad, and overall, this is a great poem.
It could use some work though. I'm actually looking forward to see what other poems you can come up with in the future.
-
Tiff. xx
5YoungInsideThis is quite a powerful piece. I enjoyed reading it, although I found the ending a little.. abrupt. The rhyming isn't bad, and overall, this is a great poem.
It could use some work though. I'm actually looking forward to see what other poems you can come up with in the future.
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Tiff. xx
9/15/2007 c1 5candii-apple
whoa...so deep...and emotional xD nice work! i felt obliged to review seeing as though u actually took the time to review a lot of my stuff ^_^ (thx!) short but awesome poem! =)
5candii-applewhoa...so deep...and emotional xD nice work! i felt obliged to review seeing as though u actually took the time to review a lot of my stuff ^_^ (thx!) short but awesome poem! =)
9/14/2007 c1 3The Toothpaste Fiend
This rhymes! Kind of. I never read a poem that doesn't rhyme - it's not really my cup of tea to be honest.
Anway, I love it! It's so simple, yet there's something aobut it (I don;t know what it is) that send chills (the good kind) runing up and down my spine.
Well Done.
3The Toothpaste FiendThis rhymes! Kind of. I never read a poem that doesn't rhyme - it's not really my cup of tea to be honest.
Anway, I love it! It's so simple, yet there's something aobut it (I don;t know what it is) that send chills (the good kind) runing up and down my spine.
Well Done.
8/10/2007 c1 6concerto49
I felt it was angst and tragic.
It was dreadful in a way. Hey! Cheer up!
There's still hope. It almost scared me. Rather horrific.
Anyhow. Cheers.
6concerto49I felt it was angst and tragic.
It was dreadful in a way. Hey! Cheer up!
There's still hope. It almost scared me. Rather horrific.
Anyhow. Cheers.
6/3/2007 c1 2psychotic aiba lover
;( that was a really sad poem. you wrote it in a really nice way. :) the way you just have short lines is cool and stuff. :) i liked it and it was easy to understand. :) great writing skills!
P.S. thank you so much for reviewing :)
2psychotic aiba lover;( that was a really sad poem. you wrote it in a really nice way. :) the way you just have short lines is cool and stuff. :) i liked it and it was easy to understand. :) great writing skills!
P.S. thank you so much for reviewing :)
5/17/2007 c1 remae
I could tell you put a lot of emotion into this. The rhyme scheme isn't exactly the same throughtout the verses, but it still sounds good. (: It's sad, but the words make it very powerful, nice work
I could tell you put a lot of emotion into this. The rhyme scheme isn't exactly the same throughtout the verses, but it still sounds good. (: It's sad, but the words make it very powerful, nice work