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7/28/2008 c1 10Koki Enwai
Quite sad, but really well done. I enjoyed reading this.

- Koki
5/20/2008 c1 2Adis Crow
Love it.

11/20/2007 c1 19postcards from italy
i liked this poem a lot :D

your writing style is great, it was really sad, almost made me feel depressed.

the rhyming was great but i found the ending a little weak, but i'm not one to talk =D

overall this was a great poem :D

- pretty yuina

P.S.: thanks for reviewing, i hope you continue reading
10/22/2007 c1 11Elle dont tu lis les histoires
so emo... :(

not much more to say, really.

i like how it rhymes tho
9/23/2007 c1 15Amei666
You are so EMO... You now have no right to insult me anymore on that subject...

Anyway, good emotional poem, it makes me feel depressed ^^ Seriously, I didn't know you could write poetry (and emo to boot!) so, yeah...
9/22/2007 c1 5YoungInside
This is quite a powerful piece. I enjoyed reading it, although I found the ending a little.. abrupt. The rhyming isn't bad, and overall, this is a great poem.

It could use some work though. I'm actually looking forward to see what other poems you can come up with in the future.


Tiff. xx
9/15/2007 c1 5candii-apple
whoa...so deep...and emotional xD nice work! i felt obliged to review seeing as though u actually took the time to review a lot of my stuff ^_^ (thx!) short but awesome poem! =)
9/14/2007 c1 3The Toothpaste Fiend
This rhymes! Kind of. I never read a poem that doesn't rhyme - it's not really my cup of tea to be honest.

Anway, I love it! It's so simple, yet there's something aobut it (I don;t know what it is) that send chills (the good kind) runing up and down my spine.

Well Done.
8/10/2007 c1 6concerto49
I felt it was angst and tragic.

It was dreadful in a way. Hey! Cheer up!

There's still hope. It almost scared me. Rather horrific.

Anyhow. Cheers.
6/3/2007 c1 2psychotic aiba lover
;( that was a really sad poem. you wrote it in a really nice way. :) the way you just have short lines is cool and stuff. :) i liked it and it was easy to understand. :) great writing skills!

P.S. thank you so much for reviewing :)
5/17/2007 c1 remae
I could tell you put a lot of emotion into this. The rhyme scheme isn't exactly the same throughtout the verses, but it still sounds good. (: It's sad, but the words make it very powerful, nice work

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